Haiku (A Secret Shared)

skipping on tip toes sharing secrets with the wind a hush of crisp leaves
** for 'A leaf in the wind (Autumn)' sponsored by Rick Parise
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Augustus Avatar
September 24, 2010 at 1:54 PM
Really like your second line! It make this piece really magical I think. Congratulations on getting a win in this contest.
Anish Avatar
September 15, 2010 at 4:17 PM
Nice autumn haiku! Liked tha last line especially! Yours Matthew Anish
Fraser Avatar
September 12, 2010 at 2:56 PM
Many congratulations Sharon on your win in Rick's fine contest with this gem of a Haiku >> James :)
Hornschuch Avatar
September 10, 2010 at 1:15 PM
nice haiku, brought a grin to my chin...
Chu Avatar
September 8, 2010 at 12:03 AM
The more I read it, the more I like it. "a hush of crisp leaves"...very well written.
Brown Avatar
September 7, 2010 at 3:56 AM
Congratulations on your win Sharon in Rick Parise's contest "A Leaf In The Wind (Autumn)". Love, Carol
Nandy Avatar
September 6, 2010 at 9:25 PM
A NICE ONE DEAR SHARON ! Thanks for reading and commenting on my poems . - Raj
Roberts Avatar
September 6, 2010 at 4:40 PM
beautiful, congrats on your win
Dietrich Avatar
September 6, 2010 at 11:13 AM
Wow, Sharon, did I see this before. I just love this. Congratulations. LUv, Andrea
Neels Avatar
September 6, 2010 at 4:25 AM
Sharon, congrats on your win in the contest :) Wilma
Neels Avatar
September 6, 2010 at 4:24 AM
Sgaron, congrats on your win in the contest :) Wilma
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 5, 2010 at 10:14 PM
Congratulations on your winning haiku Sharon. Great imagery!
Haick Avatar
September 5, 2010 at 7:53 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest, Sharon. Peace, love, Audrey
Mehta Avatar
September 5, 2010 at 7:02 PM
Congratulations on the 14th place win in the contest, Sharon
Scripca Avatar
September 5, 2010 at 6:07 PM
An original approach of childhood skipping on tip toes. I used a child's vision in my haiku too:). Congratulations on your win, dear Sharon. Love, iolanda
Taylor Avatar
September 5, 2010 at 5:48 PM
Congrats, Sharon. Nice going. Ralph
Sweetheart Avatar
September 5, 2010 at 5:11 PM
Congrats Sharon on your winning poem in Rick's contest... a lovely write and win for u to enjoy tonight my friend with luv..
Walters Avatar
September 1, 2010 at 5:57 PM
Oh, I lovel this! skipping on tip toes- just love the sound and image it conjures. this is lovely! best wishes and hugs, kris
K. Avatar
August 31, 2010 at 1:45 PM
Hi Sharon :) -- quick hi ;) -- heehee-- enjoyed this lovely haiku of yours that evokes such a carefree feeling for me...;) see you around....hugs nikko :)
Fraser Avatar
August 31, 2010 at 1:12 PM
Of to the park I go this Autumn to live this lovely Haiku >> James :)
Mehta Avatar
August 30, 2010 at 5:49 PM
A nice haiku on the falling leaf contest. Good luck, Sharon
Peranteau Avatar
August 30, 2010 at 4:53 PM
I'm loving these Autumn poems....somebody help...I dislike the heat so much...ty for the coming inspiring lust of mine...the cold !! james
Sweetheart Avatar
August 30, 2010 at 4:07 PM
LUV this one Sharon.. good luck in the new contest.. my entry is "Resplendent Rhapsody".. my wedding photos are now posted on my new blog..luv.. was only allowed ten as the systems will not let more than ten now.. and we have hundreds from Italy.. enjoy..luv..
Sapp Avatar
August 30, 2010 at 11:58 AM
Lovely image from childhood. I like this very much!
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