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Haiku Cranes

Stately red crowned cranes prancing in the snowy field ~ my tallest sister.

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Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 11/20/2014 11:31:00 AM

Excellent haiku Michael! Truly enjoyed it. A 7 for me! Love and light! :) xxxx D.

Michael Newman
Date: 11/20/2014 11:32:00 AM

Thanks Dorian for your time and comment,appreciated Miken

David Meade

Date: 11/20/2014 10:58:00 AM

Nice, does she liked to be called a crane?

Michael Newman
Date: 11/20/2014 11:17:00 AM

Thanks David. Only when she needs lifting ! Miken

Darlene Gifford

Date: 11/20/2014 7:38:00 AM

very creative! Loved your crane/sister connection. A 7 from me.

Michael Newman
Date: 11/20/2014 7:44:00 AM

Thank you.Your time and comment is appreciated . Miken