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oriental pool koi on the surface feeding bright vibrant colours ~ For haiku contest on theme of fish Sponsor Mick Talbot Written on Wednesday 18th April 2018.

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Date: 5/7/2018 12:34:00 PM
Brilliant imagery! Belated congrats on your gold winner, Tom! ~ Gershon
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Date: 5/7/2018 1:27:00 PM
Thank you Gershon, I've got the bug for haiku's,I love doing them. Tom
Date: 4/27/2018 1:52:00 PM
Gold medal; you are on a lovely little roll my friend! I am happy for you!
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Date: 4/28/2018 9:28:00 AM
Thanks so much Caren. Tom
Date: 4/24/2018 8:46:00 AM
So happy to see this one in gold! Congratulations Tom! :) xomo!
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Date: 4/25/2018 5:42:00 AM
Thank you Maureen. Tom
Date: 4/23/2018 9:53:00 PM
Back with well deserved congrats on your gold medal win, Tom.
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Date: 4/25/2018 5:43:00 AM
Thank you Line Tom
Date: 4/23/2018 5:10:00 PM
How coy! Congrats on your well-deserved trophy, Tom! :) Gershon
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Date: 4/25/2018 5:44:00 AM
Thank you Gershon. Tom.
Date: 4/23/2018 1:56:00 PM
- Congratulations on your 1st place in the haiku contest, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/25/2018 5:44:00 AM
Thank you Sunshine. Tom
Date: 4/23/2018 12:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Beautiful imagery.
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Date: 4/25/2018 5:45:00 AM
Thank you Susan. Tom
Date: 4/23/2018 9:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Tom with your beautifully written haiku. :))
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Date: 4/25/2018 5:45:00 AM
Thanks Roy.
Date: 4/23/2018 8:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your gold medal win Tom! Wow, some biggies in the photo!
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Date: 4/25/2018 5:46:00 AM
Thank you Mick.greetings from Portugal. Tom.
Date: 4/19/2018 5:03:00 PM
Hi Tom, Lovely write and pic ::)))~~Niall
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Date: 4/20/2018 12:33:00 AM
Thanks very much Niall, glad you liked it. Tom.
Date: 4/18/2018 6:04:00 PM
Pretty poem and picture.
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Date: 4/19/2018 1:48:00 AM
Thank you Andrea. Tom.
Date: 4/18/2018 2:43:00 PM
So colorful.. I think I've seen this pond, isn't this in Vegas?
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Date: 4/19/2018 1:46:00 AM
Looked again Pashang , no indication of where that pic was taken, hopefully someone might recognise it and shout up. Tom
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Date: 4/18/2018 6:02:00 PM
Hi again, I think it is either in Vegas or Laughlin Nevada...I even fed them..
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Date: 4/18/2018 3:01:00 PM
Thanks Pashang, Sorry but I do not know the location, I got the image from stockvault royalty free but I wish it was my garden. Tom.
Date: 4/18/2018 12:50:00 PM
What LOVELY imagery. Beautiful, Tom.
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Date: 4/18/2018 1:05:00 PM
Thank you Line, Our old neighbour had them and they were beautiful to see. Tom
Date: 4/18/2018 10:06:00 AM
I can picture them and see their brilliance. Good write Tom.
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Date: 4/18/2018 10:31:00 AM
Thanks Caren, they are very theruputic to watch and amazing colours. Tom.
Date: 4/18/2018 9:41:00 AM
A colorful Haiku Tom. When we were in Hawaii last month I used to watch these colorful fish in the many ponds around the Hotel resort complex. Fascinating to watch but not as colorful as your picture. They were a gift to The Hilton by the Japanese Emperor years ago and are very valuable...All the best for the contest ~Hugs ...Maria :)
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Date: 4/18/2018 10:32:00 AM
Thanks Maria, they are indeed beautiful fish and as you say very relaxing to watch . Tom.
Date: 4/18/2018 8:41:00 AM
I've had koi and still keep goldfish, sparkling Haiku Tom! Enjoyed :) xomo!
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Date: 4/18/2018 8:54:00 AM
Thanks Maureen, yes beautiful fish, our old neighbour used to keep them. Tom
Date: 4/18/2018 6:39:00 AM
When in China, I had many times the opportunity to witness this beautiful phenomenon which so vividly is portrayed by your wonderful Haiku!
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Date: 4/18/2018 6:52:00 AM
Thank you Demetrios.It must be a very awe inspiring sight. Tom.
Date: 4/18/2018 4:19:00 AM
- A colorful and beautiful haiku, Tom - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/18/2018 4:35:00 AM
Thank you very much Sunshine. Our neighbour had a pool with koi and it was beautiful to see especially at feeding time. Tom
Date: 4/18/2018 3:54:00 AM
very beautifully expressed Tom and I love the pic:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/18/2018 4:18:00 AM
Thanks very much Jan, so many colourful pics I was spoilt for choice. Tom.