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A heart learning language of love but also grief The grief learning heart to go uphill death is heavy 20.10.2012 A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 3/31/2013 8:28:00 AM
learning the language of love is quite a laborious process. Enjoyed!
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Date: 3/31/2013 10:41:00 AM
Kyle,appreciate your visit and thank you for your comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/4/2012 4:41:00 PM
I like it Anne ;}
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Date: 11/5/2012 2:03:00 AM
Debbie,appreciate your visit and thank you for your comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/31/2012 3:48:00 PM
Oh....This one is heart heavy! <3
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Date: 10/31/2012 3:51:00 PM
Dan,appreciate your visit and thank you for your comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/27/2012 1:57:00 PM
So true on this haiku sort of sad too. love phyl
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Date: 10/27/2012 1:58:00 PM
Phyllis,appreciate your visit and thank you for your comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/26/2012 4:04:00 PM
very interesting, but a bit sad Jancarl
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Date: 10/26/2012 4:06:00 PM
Jancarl,appreciate your visit and thank you for your comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/25/2012 3:31:00 PM
Yes, the human condition doesn't allow one without the other. Hears hoping your load is light.
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Date: 10/26/2012 2:38:00 AM
Robert,appreciate your visit and thank you for your comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/25/2012 5:53:00 AM
deep haiku Anne.....best wishes....love
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Date: 10/25/2012 12:24:00 PM
Joseph,appreciate your visit and thank you for your comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/25/2012 4:07:00 AM
A profound write by you here Anne.Enjoyed the read.
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Date: 10/25/2012 12:24:00 PM
Kash,appreciate your visit and thank you for your comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/24/2012 9:31:00 PM
Beautiful haiku, Anne.Enjoyed reading it.Hugs, Watisungla :)
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Date: 10/25/2012 2:02:00 AM
Thanks for your visit and comments . - Many warm hugs from Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/24/2012 12:25:00 PM
Awesome combination of haiku. So glad to read your poems today.
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Date: 10/24/2012 12:34:00 PM
Thanks for your visit and comments . - Many warm hugs from Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/23/2012 3:59:00 PM
So profound my dear Anne Wonderful. You are now the queen of Haiku!! Luv n hugs Michael
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Date: 10/24/2012 1:46:00 AM
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Date: 10/23/2012 12:00:00 PM
Really marvelous and heart touching coz you have touched very deeply the side effects of love and grief. Thanks for giving time to read my write. Loved always, bl
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Date: 10/23/2012 12:53:00 PM
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Date: 10/23/2012 10:48:00 AM
wonderful, yes Anne it seems we have to learn both, love and grief,, love how you constructed this...
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Date: 10/23/2012 12:53:00 PM
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Date: 10/23/2012 1:18:00 AM
A really deep haiku to dig into it and discover things
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Date: 10/23/2012 2:11:00 AM
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Date: 10/22/2012 3:11:00 PM
I enjoyed your haiku set here, sweetie. How is it going today?
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Date: 10/22/2012 3:16:00 PM
It's been a nice autumn day Andrea. - Thanks for your visit and comments . - Many warm hugs from Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/22/2012 1:46:00 PM
pithy and profound, still thinking.......well done. Blessings.
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Date: 10/22/2012 2:47:00 PM
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Date: 10/22/2012 11:32:00 AM
You know what? You are right. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Date: 10/22/2012 11:37:00 AM
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Date: 10/22/2012 7:41:00 AM
so true...death is heavy...
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Date: 10/22/2012 11:36:00 AM
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Date: 10/21/2012 6:34:00 PM
I couldn't agree more with these 2 haikus. Fantastic job!
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Date: 10/22/2012 1:03:00 AM
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Date: 10/21/2012 12:50:00 PM
Anne, your haiku, runs deep... does not matter if you are not a master... you hit a deep note with both haikus... grief is , bad when love is gone... xox~pd
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Date: 10/21/2012 12:55:00 PM
But fun to try. Thanks for your visit and comments . - Many warm hugs from Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/21/2012 12:04:00 PM
‡ I Love The Feeling Along Side The Tone I Find Within This, Beautiful Short Yet Splendid Verse, Sweet Beautiful Anne Lise. Not Certain If This Corresponds With Any Thoughts Here, Beautiful Girl, But I Have Been Trying To Slay Mrs. Hyde For Years Now ? Yet I Feel For Her So I Might Let Her Hang Around Until I Relocate; Poor Girl, LOL. Beautiful Poem, Truly, And Thank You For Your Precious Loving Hearts Lovely Visit. Sweet Kisses, Rachel ‡
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Date: 10/21/2012 12:15:00 PM
I am not "expert" on Haiku - but fun to try. Thanks for your visit and comments . - Many warm hugs from Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/21/2012 11:08:00 AM
These are two very powerful and awesome haikus my dear friend, Anne-Lise! I love it/them! They'll really move the reader's feeling, just like mine. Thank you so much for sharing and especially for your very inspiring comments on my latest poem. Have a blessed and grace-filled time/day always in sunshine! love and hugs:) Leonora
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Date: 10/21/2012 11:17:00 AM
I am not "expert" on Haiku - but fun to try. Thanks for your visit and comments . - Many warm hugs from Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/21/2012 10:08:00 AM
Lif's has its ups and downs, that's a heartfelt expressed poem. Thanks for sharing it,God bles you. Hugs!Erich
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Date: 10/21/2012 11:19:00 AM
Sorry: Erich.
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Date: 10/21/2012 10:28:00 AM
I am not "expert" on Haiku - but fun to try. Thanks for your visit and comments Toquyen. - Many warm hugs from Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/21/2012 8:14:00 AM
Anne-Lise I like the inversion in these, it is very thought provoking, well done...David
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Date: 10/21/2012 11:18:00 AM
Sorry: David.
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Date: 10/21/2012 10:28:00 AM
I am not "expert" on Haiku - but fun to try. Thanks for your visit and comments Toquyen. - Many warm hugs from Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/21/2012 8:05:00 AM
Good write... It works very well! It leaves us lingering with images... PS. I've been busy with the Trolls and friends again... your friend.
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Date: 10/21/2012 11:18:00 AM
Sorry: Carol
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Date: 10/21/2012 10:27:00 AM
I am not "expert" on Haiku - but fun to try. Thanks for your visit and comments Toquyen. - Many warm hugs from Anne-Lise :)
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