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A heart
                            learning language of love
                                    but also grief

                                       The grief
                            learning heart to go uphill
                                    death is heavy











20.10.2012
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Kyle Maples Date: 3/31/2013 8:28:00 AM learning the language of love is quite a laborious process. Enjoyed! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/31/2013 10:41:00 AM Kyle,appreciate your visit and thank you for your comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Duncan Date: 11/4/2012 4:41:00 PM I like it Anne ;} Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/5/2012 2:03:00 AM Debbie,appreciate your visit and thank you for your comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Dan Kearley Date: 10/31/2012 3:48:00 PM Oh....This one is heart heavy! <3 Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/31/2012 3:51:00 PM Dan,appreciate your visit and thank you for your comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock Date: 10/27/2012 1:57:00 PM So true on this haiku sort of sad too. love phyl Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/27/2012 1:58:00 PM Phyllis,appreciate your visit and thank you for your comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Jancarl Campi Date: 10/26/2012 4:04:00 PM very interesting, but a bit sad Jancarl Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/26/2012 4:06:00 PM Jancarl,appreciate your visit and thank you for your comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Robert Johnson Date: 10/25/2012 3:31:00 PM Yes, the human condition doesn't allow one without the other. Hears hoping your load is light. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/26/2012 2:38:00 AM Robert,appreciate your visit and thank you for your comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May Date: 10/25/2012 5:53:00 AM deep haiku Anne.....best wishes....love Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/25/2012 12:24:00 PM Joseph,appreciate your visit and thank you for your comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Kash Poet Date: 10/25/2012 4:07:00 AM A profound write by you here Anne.Enjoyed the read. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/25/2012 12:24:00 PM Kash,appreciate your visit and thank you for your comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Watisungla Ao Date: 10/24/2012 9:31:00 PM Beautiful haiku, Anne.Enjoyed reading it.Hugs, Watisungla :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/25/2012 2:02:00 AM Thanks for your visit and comments . - Many warm hugs from Anne-Lise :)

Joann Grisetti Date: 10/24/2012 12:25:00 PM Awesome combination of haiku. So glad to read your poems today. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/24/2012 12:34:00 PM Thanks for your visit and comments . - Many warm hugs from Anne-Lise :)

Michael J. Falotico Date: 10/23/2012 3:59:00 PM So profound my dear Anne Wonderful. You are now the queen of Haiku!! Luv n hugs Michael Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/24/2012 1:46:00 AM Thanks for your visit and comments . - Many warm hugs from Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath Date: 10/23/2012 12:00:00 PM Really marvelous and heart touching coz you have touched very deeply the side effects of love and grief. Thanks for giving time to read my write. Loved always, bl Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/23/2012 12:53:00 PM Thanks for your visit and comments . - Many warm hugs from Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman Date: 10/23/2012 10:48:00 AM wonderful, yes Anne it seems we have to learn both, love and grief,, love how you constructed this... Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/23/2012 12:53:00 PM Thanks for your visit and comments . - Many warm hugs from Anne-Lise :)

Vassilis Comporozos Date: 10/23/2012 1:18:00 AM A really deep haiku to dig into it and discover things Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/23/2012 2:11:00 AM Thanks for your visit and comments . - Many warm hugs from Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/22/2012 3:11:00 PM I enjoyed your haiku set here, sweetie. How is it going today? Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/22/2012 3:16:00 PM It's been a nice autumn day Andrea. - Thanks for your visit and comments . - Many warm hugs from Anne-Lise :)

Jamal Abboud Date: 10/22/2012 1:46:00 PM pithy and profound, still thinking.......well done. Blessings. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/22/2012 2:47:00 PM Thanks for your visit and comments . - Many warm hugs from Anne-Lise :)

Lucilla Carrillo Date: 10/22/2012 11:32:00 AM You know what? You are right. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/22/2012 11:37:00 AM Thanks for your visit and comments . - Many warm hugs from Anne-Lise :)

Black Eyed Susan Date: 10/22/2012 7:41:00 AM so true...death is heavy... Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/22/2012 11:36:00 AM Thanks for your visit and comments . - Many warm hugs from Anne-Lise :)

Poet Tacito Date: 10/21/2012 6:34:00 PM I couldn't agree more with these 2 haikus. Fantastic job! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/22/2012 1:03:00 AM Thanks for your visit and comments . - Many warm hugs from Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A Date: 10/21/2012 12:50:00 PM Anne, your haiku, runs deep... does not matter if you are not a master... you hit a deep note with both haikus... grief is , bad when love is gone... xox~pd Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/21/2012 12:55:00 PM But fun to try. Thanks for your visit and comments . - Many warm hugs from Anne-Lise :)

Rachel St.Cross Date: 10/21/2012 12:04:00 PM ‡ I Love The Feeling Along Side The Tone I Find Within This, Beautiful Short Yet Splendid Verse, Sweet Beautiful Anne Lise. Not Certain If This Corresponds With Any Thoughts Here, Beautiful Girl, But I Have Been Trying To Slay Mrs. Hyde For Years Now ? Yet I Feel For Her So I Might Let Her Hang Around Until I Relocate; Poor Girl, LOL. Beautiful Poem, Truly, And Thank You For Your Precious Loving Hearts Lovely Visit. Sweet Kisses, Rachel ‡ Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/21/2012 12:15:00 PM I am not "expert" on Haiku - but fun to try. Thanks for your visit and comments . - Many warm hugs from Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun Date: 10/21/2012 11:08:00 AM These are two very powerful and awesome haikus my dear friend, Anne-Lise! I love it/them! They'll really move the reader's feeling, just like mine. Thank you so much for sharing and especially for your very inspiring comments on my latest poem. Have a blessed and grace-filled time/day always in sunshine! love and hugs:) Leonora Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/21/2012 11:17:00 AM I am not "expert" on Haiku - but fun to try. Thanks for your visit and comments . - Many warm hugs from Anne-Lise :)

Erich Goller Date: 10/21/2012 10:08:00 AM Lif's has its ups and downs, that's a heartfelt expressed poem. Thanks for sharing it,God bles you. Hugs!Erich Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/21/2012 11:19:00 AM Sorry: Erich. Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/21/2012 10:28:00 AM I am not "expert" on Haiku - but fun to try. Thanks for your visit and comments Toquyen. - Many warm hugs from Anne-Lise :)

David Williams Date: 10/21/2012 8:14:00 AM Anne-Lise I like the inversion in these, it is very thought provoking, well done...David Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/21/2012 11:18:00 AM Sorry: David. Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/21/2012 10:28:00 AM I am not "expert" on Haiku - but fun to try. Thanks for your visit and comments Toquyen. - Many warm hugs from Anne-Lise :)

Carol Eastman Date: 10/21/2012 8:05:00 AM Good write... It works very well! It leaves us lingering with images... PS. I've been busy with the Trolls and friends again... your friend. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/21/2012 11:18:00 AM Sorry: Carol Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/21/2012 10:27:00 AM I am not "expert" on Haiku - but fun to try. Thanks for your visit and comments Toquyen. - Many warm hugs from Anne-Lise :)

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