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Haiku 70 -The Solitary Bird and Solitude

lone bluebird sings

on my back porch swing
  
I hug myself


Or

lone robin sings

on the mountain porch swing

I hug myself

Copyright © Charmaine Chircop | Year Posted 2014

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Richard Lamoureux Date: 10/5/2014 6:59:00 AM This is sweet, I like the first one better. Login to Reply

Liam Mcdaid Date: 10/3/2014 11:03:00 AM beautifully penned visions charmaine excellent pen dear friend god bless Login to Reply

Daver Austin Date: 10/3/2014 10:28:00 AM Love haiku, love these too. The hug is priceless. Thanks, Char, for turning me on to Haiku Journal. They accepted my rose haiku. Lve, daver Login to Reply Charmaine Chircop Date: 10/3/2014 11:26:00 AM I am so happy they did .Hurray!!If I come along other haiku magazines that are open for submissions.I let you know : ).

Casarah Nance Date: 10/3/2014 8:04:00 AM I hug you too! hugs hugs wrapped up with loves :) Login to Reply

Ma Yaseen Date: 10/3/2014 2:46:00 AM This is lovely, I love it... Well done Malik Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/2/2014 10:55:00 PM hey now this is called killing two birds with one stone. heeheehee. Love this concept, sweet Charma!! Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 10/2/2014 9:41:00 PM hey little one! you don't need ONE & LONE you can use either or - you could also use A [a bluebird sings/ on the backporch swing- I hug myself] [a] means 1, one means 1, lone means 1 ... Light & Love Login to Reply Charmaine Chircop Date: 10/3/2014 2:08:00 AM Yes dear Deborah my haiku mentor,you are right.I fixed it : )..Thankyou !!!

Tim Smith Date: 10/2/2014 4:43:00 PM Two lovely birds sing...... On my old back porch swing....... I give you hugs........I love them...hugs Tim Login to Reply Charmaine Chircop Date: 10/3/2014 2:09:00 AM Now that is a much nicer haiku Tim ;.)

Maurice Yvonne Date: 10/2/2014 4:03:00 PM I love them both Char. I don't know what others will think. Login to Reply