Haiku 18 .

Spider weaving web . His crochet entrapment plan . Yes ! sew far , so good .

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/12/2010 10:14:00 PM

Ah, a great word play!!

Date: 12/1/2008 2:16:00 PM

Got a chuckle out of this one. You have a gift for humor and brightening up the day. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for taking time to comment on my poem. Blessings to you. Karen

Juliane Thomas

Date: 11/24/2008 5:30:00 AM

Love the last line of this haiku! Thank you for the morning chuckle and for your comment on my haiku "Winter Creek". I appreciate it so much!

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/8/2008 6:20:00 PM

Loved this....very clever writing, and keen sense of humor!! ~Carrie

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 8/28/2008 10:00:00 AM

I like the double entendre with regard to the word "sew". Excellent form and perfect imagery made for a great write. Michael

Farah Chamma

Date: 6/10/2008 11:22:00 PM

That's a smart piece! Very creative Sean..Impressive^^ TYONe, Farah