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haiku 9

plump ripe blackberries
drops of morning dew glisten
forgotten basket

4-1-2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/14/2014 4:10:00 PM
ooooh I like this one, Donna! You really got the gist of that "a-ha" ending line :) And you started numbering them, too... haha. I haven't been on this site in over a year... and I see I've been missing out. Good to see how everyone is doing!
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Date: 7/8/2014 2:36:00 PM
Donna, good reflection of inner feelings poetically.....a blessed gran.....hope all is well..
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Date: 6/21/2014 7:00:00 PM
seeing this one again. It is such a great haiku!!!
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Date: 6/2/2014 3:19:00 PM
Great write - well done!
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Date: 6/1/2014 8:38:00 AM
Since I LOVE the smell of blackberries and the marmalade made of them to me this haiku number 9 is like Chanel's number 5. Dutch Greetings Elly
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Date: 5/20/2014 10:11:00 PM
I do the the Haiku ;)
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Date: 5/7/2014 9:42:00 AM
As was common among the Japanese, one's haiku often called for a response. More common with tanka but this is delightful and I will reply: pail full of berries / sits far behind on the path / along with the snake
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Date: 5/6/2014 3:32:00 PM
Sensuous. J.A.B.
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Date: 4/23/2014 10:49:00 AM
as you take care of others, take care of yourself as well, donna.. so good to hear from you.. huggs
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Date: 4/23/2014 1:14:00 AM
Awesome! Great haiku, Donna. Too bad no one's reading it lol Drop by sometime. Hugs, Mel :)
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Date: 4/22/2014 12:04:00 PM
Donna, this one reads really well.
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Date: 4/21/2014 4:41:00 PM
your poem is featured this week; i don;t remember the title.. congrats donns!.. huggs
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Date: 4/15/2014 3:56:00 PM
Hi, Donna, wow this is really good, just love this type of poetry,,,ever so visual,,,,,
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Date: 4/15/2014 1:54:00 PM
donns!.. :) huggs to you...
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Date: 4/15/2014 10:29:00 AM
Hey sis! I've been out of touch for awhile. Coming by to say hi...sooooo...HI! Great haiku, too. Love ya....Caleb
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Donna Jones
Date: 4/27/2014 10:29:00 PM
Hey lil bro...hope all is OK with your friends baby...been prayin for them.hope you are OK....God bless......sis
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Donna Jones
Date: 4/17/2014 10:40:00 PM
Thanks lil bro...needed that.....take care and have a great spring ..crappie are starting to spawn here..
Date: 4/13/2014 2:45:00 PM
happy new week donns.. missed ya!. huggs
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Date: 4/12/2014 3:39:00 PM
oh dear, lol. love this witty haiku
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Date: 4/9/2014 3:24:00 PM
A very sweet morsel of a poem, Donna! This brought me back to a warm summer's day. Very nicely done! Congratulations on your win, as well!...Thank you for the kind congrats on my poem. :)
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Date: 4/7/2014 5:38:00 PM
A lovely haiku Donna..Hope all is well with you..
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Donna Jones
Date: 4/24/2014 11:57:00 PM
Thanks ken.....getting there.....how about with you?
Date: 4/7/2014 12:18:00 PM
more, donns.. huggs!
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Donna Jones
Date: 4/27/2014 10:25:00 PM
Hey nett....got an idea working in my head bout my old truck..:-) :-) :-) ...maybe soon.....-:-) :-) :-) :-) :-)
Date: 4/7/2014 10:37:00 AM
Good morning Donna.
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Donna Jones
Date: 4/24/2014 11:56:00 PM
Good nite Richard......been caring for a sick family member.....hopefully things are under control....good to see ya
Date: 4/6/2014 3:48:00 PM
you did it; so wonderful donns!.. sweet congrats!.. huggs
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Donna Jones
Date: 4/24/2014 11:52:00 PM
Hello nette...now second ambulance run....diabetic coma.....yowzer....tough old girl..:-) :-) almost 91....she is doing better tonight....I'm tired..:-) :-) :-)
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Donna Jones
Date: 4/17/2014 10:38:00 PM
Thanks so much nett....been gone a while...mother in law had stroke and heart attack..now she is with me recuperating...:-) :-) have a great weekend..
Date: 4/6/2014 3:24:00 PM
Congrats on a great win Donna
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Donna Jones
Date: 4/17/2014 10:36:00 PM
Thanks Joseph..:-)
Date: 4/6/2014 2:29:00 PM
Very nice haiku. My apologies for not being around for a while. I've made a major but temporary move to the NW corner of the USA. Adjusting is more difficult than I thought it would be. However, I'm recovering slowly, slowly ... Jack
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Donna Jones
Date: 4/17/2014 10:35:00 PM
Good luck with the move Jack..and thanks for the nice visit...
Date: 4/6/2014 7:55:00 AM
Ahh!! Enjoyed reading this one today..I am glad that I chose it to read..I can remember going to try to pick a few wild blackberries or dewberries..Those cobblers were wonderful made from the berries..Sara
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Donna Jones
Date: 4/17/2014 10:33:00 PM
Ahhh...yeah..always.....thanks Sara...
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