Haiku 98

Haiku 98
	
	
	fenceline hackberry’s 
	yellowed leaves drifting downward
	into Wild Horse Creek

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Richard Lamoureux

November 9, 2013 at 9:45 AM

Let me know when you post your 100th.

Jack Jordan

November 9, 2013 at 11:56 AM

Will do...

Andrea Dietrich

November 9, 2013 at 1:00 AM

I'd like to see this Wild horse Creek!!

Jack Jordan

November 9, 2013 at 9:10 AM

I pass over in heading south on I-35 from OKC to Dallas. It's where I saw the red sumac and hackberry at 75mph... Jack

Richard Lamoureux

November 8, 2013 at 10:10 PM

So close to 100! You will have to do something spectacular for you 100th one. Mind you this one is going to be hard to top.

Jack Jordan

November 8, 2013 at 10:15 PM

Yes, I've been thinking about that... Jack

Nette Onclaud

November 8, 2013 at 5:48 PM

extraodinary image of fence and leaves with greeat juxtaposition jack,, one for the road!..:) huggs

Poet Tacito

November 8, 2013 at 4:24 PM

You laid this out strong, once again. :) Excellent!

Jack Jordan

November 8, 2013 at 4:26 PM

As always, Drake, Thanks for reading it. I value your opinion... Jack

Anne-Lise Andresen

November 8, 2013 at 12:20 PM

- A beautiful picture in your haiku 98, Jack! - Wish you a nice weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jack Jordan

November 8, 2013 at 12:22 PM

Thank you, Anne-lise, and a good weekend to you as well... Jack

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