Haiku 98

Haiku 98
	
	
	fenceline hackberry’s 
	yellowed leaves drifting downward
	into Wild Horse Creek

autumnhaiku

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/9/2013 9:45:00 AM

Let me know when you post your 100th.

Jack Jordan
Date: 11/9/2013 11:56:00 AM

Will do...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/9/2013 1:00:00 AM

I'd like to see this Wild horse Creek!!

Jack Jordan
Date: 11/9/2013 9:10:00 AM

I pass over in heading south on I-35 from OKC to Dallas. It's where I saw the red sumac and hackberry at 75mph... Jack

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/8/2013 10:10:00 PM

So close to 100! You will have to do something spectacular for you 100th one. Mind you this one is going to be hard to top.

Jack Jordan
Date: 11/8/2013 10:15:00 PM

Yes, I've been thinking about that... Jack

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/8/2013 5:48:00 PM

extraodinary image of fence and leaves with greeat juxtaposition jack,, one for the road!..:) huggs

Poet Tacito

Date: 11/8/2013 4:24:00 PM

You laid this out strong, once again. :) Excellent!

Jack Jordan
Date: 11/8/2013 4:26:00 PM

As always, Drake, Thanks for reading it. I value your opinion... Jack

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/8/2013 12:20:00 PM

- A beautiful picture in your haiku 98, Jack! - Wish you a nice weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jack Jordan
Date: 11/8/2013 12:22:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-lise, and a good weekend to you as well... Jack

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