Haiku

haiku a mouse in autumn thinking summer-- oh so wrong winter cold water
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Lamoureux Avatar
November 24, 2017 at 6:23 PM
brrrrrr, poor little mouse. I hope he's not a Canadian mouse.
Talbot Avatar
November 25, 2017 at 7:02 AM
No, East side of the pond. As to whether it survived its double ordeal, (even after being dried), I doubt it, but we gave it a chance. Thanks for your comment Richard :)
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