Haiku 91

Haiku 91
	
	
	watching weeks and months of wild bewilderment over and over
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Tacito Avatar
October 3, 2013 at 7:50 AM
You caught my attention with the format here. Very nicely done!
Jordan Avatar
October 3, 2013 at 8:36 AM
Thanks, Drake. I appreciate the comment... Jack
Dietrich Avatar
October 2, 2013 at 6:02 PM
Nice to see another haiku of yours. Interesting when they are in one line like this!
Jordan Avatar
October 2, 2013 at 8:43 PM
I'm interested in this form because the word-play can be richer, more complex... Jack
Gorelick Avatar
October 2, 2013 at 12:59 PM
Like the line format...your getting quite good at this! BG
Jordan Avatar
October 2, 2013 at 4:16 PM
Thanks, BG. I'm working on it... Jack
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