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Haiku 8 - Pier Sentinel

aqua water swirls

salt sprayed air licks dry sea oats

quick pelican gulps

Copyright, September 18, 2014
Faye Lanham Gibson

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Brenda Meier-Hans

September 28, 2014 at 7:43 PM

Congratulations on your win Faye

David Mohn

September 28, 2014 at 10:38 AM

So dense in imagery Faye...congrats on this skillful beauty

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

September 28, 2014 at 1:25 AM

:) each word a beautiful imagery..:) congrats!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

September 27, 2014 at 11:58 PM

Amazing haiku Faye! Congrats on top win!

Andrea Dietrich

September 27, 2014 at 9:49 PM

oh, this one is pretty cool!! Congrats again to you.

Sandra Haight

September 27, 2014 at 7:26 PM

Faye, congratulations on 1st place for your outstanding Haiku! Loved the imagery. Sandra

Maurice Yvonne

September 27, 2014 at 5:35 PM

CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR First Place WIN!!!! A well deserved win.

Maurice Yvonne

September 27, 2014 at 5:33 PM

What an excellent haiku!!!!

Edward Ebbs

September 27, 2014 at 5:32 PM

Congrats :)

Jan Allison

September 27, 2014 at 4:54 PM

beautiful haiku many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xxx

Charlotte Puddifoot

September 27, 2014 at 4:51 PM

just laughing at what andrea said below, 'flip' I did! this was probably the most technically correct of them all, but the good thing is that you managed to avoid the flat dullness that imbues so much technically correct haiku, and instead you wrote something colourful, lively and interesting! congrats on your 1st place win :)