Haiku # 8

THE  SUMMER  SWALLOW

SCISSORS  THRO  THE  MORNING  AIR  .

CUTTING  QUITE  A  DASH  .

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Andrea Dietrich

June 12, 2010 at 10:24 PM

THis one very vividly shown. One of the best of the bird haiku! Maybe it could work in Linda's season senryu contest as summer entry (she has it titled senryu but in reality, she is asking for Haiku) Go figure!

Carrie Richards

August 30, 2009 at 8:03 AM

Congratulations Sean, on this winning haiku!! Dashing indeed !! :) Carrie

Raul Moreno

March 16, 2009 at 12:20 PM

Nice haiku Sean, nice imagery...Raul

Robin L. Gass

February 28, 2009 at 8:17 PM

This is a lovely picture, Sean! Very clever and perfect form! Love, QR

Ed Coet

August 21, 2008 at 10:46 AM

Once upon a time haiku was predominantly the domain of male poets. We can see that is no longer the case with this magnificent haiku competition in which the top 8 places went to women. They got it because they earned and deserved it. I was beaten out, fair and square. Congratulations on being only one of two males to finish in the top ten. Yea Sean! :) -ED-

August 15, 2008 at 2:42 PM

Thanks for allowing me to smile with this one. Congratulations on being chosen as one of the haiku contest winners. I wish you continuing success with your writing. Karen

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