Haiku

lighter trees-
different green shades
carpeting the ground
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Daniel Avatar
April 9, 2017 at 9:12 AM
Amazing green haiku, Teddy:)
Kimathi Avatar
April 12, 2017 at 4:06 AM
Thank you, Jo. I really appreciate it!! ;-)
Michaels Avatar
April 8, 2017 at 4:48 AM
Lovely Haiku. Nice write, Teddy!
Kimathi Avatar
April 12, 2017 at 4:05 AM
Thank you so much for enjoying it, John!! ;-)
Callus Avatar
April 7, 2017 at 5:05 PM
Shades and hues in green make a lovely visual, Teddy. With a few words you paint a big picture! // paul
Kimathi Avatar
April 12, 2017 at 4:02 AM
You're right, Paul. Thank you so much for enjoying my piece!! ;-)
Sietesantos Avatar
March 30, 2017 at 9:45 AM
You pen has magically conjured a lovely imagery of green! Love it, my friend! Best regards. Pandita
Kimathi Avatar
March 30, 2017 at 6:42 PM
Hi Pandita. Your sweet comment itself is a poem.... Thank you so much for reading and enjoying my verse!! *^_^*
Allison Avatar
March 27, 2017 at 6:56 AM
very beautiful Teddy:-) hugs Jan xx
Kimathi Avatar
March 27, 2017 at 8:04 AM
Thank you so much, Jan!! *^_^*
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