Haiku

lighter trees- different green shades carpeting the ground

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/9/2017 9:12:00 AM

Amazing green haiku, Teddy:)

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 4/12/2017 4:06:00 AM

Thank you, Jo. I really appreciate it!! ;-)

John Michaels

Date: 4/8/2017 4:48:00 AM

Lovely Haiku. Nice write, Teddy!

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 4/12/2017 4:05:00 AM

Thank you so much for enjoying it, John!! ;-)

Paul Callus

Date: 4/7/2017 5:05:00 PM

Shades and hues in green make a lovely visual, Teddy. With a few words you paint a big picture! // paul

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 4/12/2017 4:02:00 AM

You're right, Paul. Thank you so much for enjoying my piece!! ;-)

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 3/30/2017 9:45:00 AM

You pen has magically conjured a lovely imagery of green! Love it, my friend! Best regards. Pandita

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/30/2017 6:42:00 PM

Hi Pandita. Your sweet comment itself is a poem.... Thank you so much for reading and enjoying my verse!! *^_^*

Jan Allison

Date: 3/27/2017 6:56:00 AM

very beautiful Teddy:-) hugs Jan xx

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/27/2017 8:04:00 AM

Thank you so much, Jan!! *^_^*