Haiku 82

Haiku 82
	
	barefoot summer boys
	hot asphalt streets bubbling tar
	blister careless feet

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Scott Thirtyseven

September 16, 2013 at 3:15 PM

I remember those days, and now wear shoes. Great write.

Jack Jordan

September 16, 2013 at 4:53 PM

Me too, on both counts... Jack

Andrea Dietrich

September 12, 2013 at 12:33 AM

Yikes. you hit the nail on the head.

Jack Jordan

September 12, 2013 at 7:55 AM

My feet remember it well, and not fondly... Jack

Nette Onclaud

September 7, 2013 at 2:04 PM

summer blisters!.. nothing short of superb, jack.. you write 'ku with such ease..:) huggs

Jack Jordan

September 7, 2013 at 2:53 PM

Thanks you, Nette. That means a lost, coming from you... Jack

Anne-Lise Andresen

September 6, 2013 at 4:44 PM

.... Sounded painfully this too .... well done, Jack! - Have a great weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jack Jordan

September 6, 2013 at 4:53 PM

I really was painful. We all had to be very careful... Jack

Barbara Gorelick

September 6, 2013 at 4:08 PM

Cute..I remember those days...typo careless? If for the contest..its a winner. BG

Jack Jordan

September 6, 2013 at 4:36 PM

Yes, a typo... Thanks... Jack

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