Haiku 80

Haiku 80
	
	
	shadow kisses...
	perfume’s whispered blush 
	sweet darkness

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Skat A

December 3, 2015 at 1:20 AM

Jack, lovely haiku, Enjoyed. SKAT

Sandra Adams

September 30, 2013 at 12:34 AM

you are very good at haikus I see...another gem :)

Jack Jordan

September 30, 2013 at 7:09 AM

Thank you, Sandra. There's a lot to learn about this deceptively simple form... Jack

Karen Anglesey

August 31, 2013 at 10:07 AM

A stunning image and now finding myself contemplating "sweet darkness"

Jack Jordan

September 30, 2013 at 7:10 AM

Thank you for the comment, Karen... Jack

Andrea Dietrich

August 26, 2013 at 3:27 PM

sweet indeed!

Jack Jordan

August 26, 2013 at 4:14 PM

Yes...

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 23, 2013 at 2:19 AM

- Beautiful .... love it !!! - Have a great weekend, Jack. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Jack Jordan

August 23, 2013 at 7:29 AM

Thanks, and a great weekend to you as well... Jack

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