Haiku 7-Traditional Haiku

trees dance leaves falling
leering Father Time watches
lamenting forest


09/19/16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Hicks Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 11:25 PM
A very abstract haiku, especially with such an ominous 2nd line. Nice haiku, James.
Inman Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 7:24 AM
Thanks for the visit Timothy. I've been in a rather dark fairy tale mood lately.
Allison Avatar
September 19, 2016 at 1:18 PM
a very dark autumnal haiku James! good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Inman Avatar
September 19, 2016 at 3:26 PM
Thanks Jan, are my writes getting darker or is it getting close to Halloween?
Onclaud Avatar
September 19, 2016 at 11:59 AM
a languid way to express an autumnal scene..fine 'ku, james..huggs
Inman Avatar
September 19, 2016 at 12:27 PM
Thank you Nette.
Raha Avatar
September 19, 2016 at 10:11 AM
Beautiful capture,Inman.
Inman Avatar
September 19, 2016 at 12:25 PM
Thanks for the visit Miraj.
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