Haiku - 7

under crimson glow
frost blankets a hidden glen
chapped lips are licked
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Meade Avatar
November 29, 2016 at 5:33 PM
Nicely done my friend -- just be careful not to touch your tongue to the steel post!!
Dietrich Avatar
November 4, 2016 at 6:57 PM
I like Jean's query. Was it by you or another?? Nice one, Tim!
Murray Avatar
November 4, 2016 at 4:20 PM
By who?
P  Avatar
November 3, 2016 at 2:42 PM
It seems a cross between a Haiku and Senryu, chapped lips aren't about nature, or are they? :) Pass the lip balm...
Green Avatar
November 3, 2016 at 6:50 AM
Beautifully done, I can feel winter in your words.
Trifiatis Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 7:44 PM
Superbly written, my friend, Tim!
May Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 6:11 PM
Beautiful verse Tim!
Allison Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 6:05 PM
wonderful haiku Tim:-) hugs Jan xx
Chircop Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 5:53 PM
Fantastic Haiku..A fave.
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