Haiku 7

autumn sun bends low shifting light and shadow meet river reflections Copyright, August 26. 2014 Faye Lanham Gibson

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Len Gasun

Date: 9/8/2014 9:28:00 AM

I love your very beautiful haiku and its very beautiful image my dear friend Faye. Many warm congratulations on your win! Big sweet hugs and cheers! love lots, Leonora

David Mohn

Date: 9/7/2014 6:59:00 PM

Whole heartedly agree with Andrea on this one...congrats

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/7/2014 5:06:00 AM

- Dear Faye - Congratulations on winning poem in the contest: "River Walk" - Well done, I like it :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/6/2014 10:49:00 PM

this is so gorgeous. No less than a top three for me!!

John Lawless

Date: 9/6/2014 3:22:00 PM

Very nice Faye. Those river sunset reflections can be more beautiful then the real view as they move through the prism where "shifting light and shadow meet"

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/6/2014 10:23:00 AM

Congratulations Faye for this beautiful Haiku. It mirrors beauty.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 9/6/2014 9:20:00 AM

Congratulations, Faye on a fine win! Excellent beautiful Haiku. Pandita

Jan Allison

Date: 9/6/2014 6:59:00 AM

Beautiful imagery Faye many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/5/2014 11:44:00 PM

That's wonderful imagery Faye, few words n amazing pic here, congrats on big win!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/5/2014 11:22:00 PM

Faye:). Congratulations, on an awesome River Walk, Win:):):) Enjoy the smiles, and my blog, You're a "River Legend" if you'd like or have time. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/26/2014 12:39:00 PM

- Lovely haiku with colorful reflections, Faye ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)