Haiku 7

sunrise exploding
the horizon separates
yellow leaves on grass

©donna jones

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Kash Poet

November 9, 2013 at 7:58 AM

Beautiful imagery in this haiku Donna! Love it.

Andrea Dietrich

November 9, 2013 at 12:59 AM

Quite an image with this one!

Jack Jordan

November 6, 2013 at 9:35 AM

An evocative image. Nicely written, for this time of year... Jack

Richard Lamoureux

November 3, 2013 at 8:35 AM

A very pretty picture!

Ravi Sathasivam

November 3, 2013 at 7:17 AM

Excellent. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

Len Gasun

November 3, 2013 at 12:01 AM

A splendid haiku my dear friend Donna. I love it. Thank you so much for sharing! Thanks a lot as well for taking your precious time to read my first horror story/poem. Have a great weekend! love lots and big hugs, Leonora

John Posey

November 2, 2013 at 6:45 PM

great haiku creativity.... I've shied away from them for awhile.... You inspire me with this one.... Jake

Cherl Dunn

November 2, 2013 at 6:42 PM

Thank you for your comment on I recall the contest inspired me to write this and made me remember a simply time of life when i was younger.

Sara Kendrick

November 2, 2013 at 3:08 PM

Enjoyed reading your creative Haiku..I can just see the scene..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Nette Onclaud

November 2, 2013 at 7:00 AM

what an amazing visual this one is... word choices leave me wanting more; amazing end line, donns!..:) huggs

Russell Sivey

November 1, 2013 at 8:37 PM

This is a tremendous and enlightening write my friend! I surely loved reading this fabulous poem this evening! This is a very awesome Haiku Donna, you wrote it so very well! What a harmonious piece, Great Work!!

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper

November 1, 2013 at 8:11 PM

A very nice Haiku you've created here Donna. I like them, though they are difficult to write them in a way that conveys your message -well you did that here. Good Job! MC