Haiku 7

A feathered cargo,
black shroud of migrating birds.
Mysteries abound.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dietrich Avatar
February 27, 2013 at 4:48 PM
hey, I see I am back to my own comment. This must be where I first met you!!
Jordan Avatar
February 27, 2013 at 5:04 PM
I believe it was. Thanks a bunch for taking the time to read them all. I'll do my best to respond. J
Gorelick Avatar
February 2, 2013 at 1:38 PM
I like it Jack! Haiku is often a mystery to me..lol..BG
Jordan Avatar
February 27, 2013 at 5:03 PM
It's something of a mystery to me too. I like the abstraction and minimalist quality. Thanks for reading it.
Dietrich Avatar
February 2, 2013 at 12:32 PM
wow, I love the imagery of that second line and the first line, incredible!!
Jordan Avatar
February 2, 2013 at 2:20 PM
Thanks again! Jack
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