Haiku # 7

MORNING~BUG   PATROLS

EARLY~BIRD  MENU  ON  SHOW  .

SO ,  COME FLY WITH  ME  .
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Dietrich Avatar
June 12, 2010 at 10:25 PM
Funny (but not for the bugs!)
Gass Avatar
February 24, 2009 at 9:58 AM
Clever Haiku, Sean. Can't wait to see those bugs (did I really just say that?) if it means Spring!!! Love, QR
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December 31, 2008 at 2:25 PM
Got a smile out of this one. Creative use of this short format. I am glad my comments have been encouraging to you. Thank you for your ongoing support. Keep on writing. I hope you have a wonderful 2009! Karen
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