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Haiku 79

smoke on the horizon forest fire harvest dust field in motion combines ragweed in full bloom allergy

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Date: 3/2/2020 8:17:00 AM
Very nicely penned Phyllis..best wishes
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Date: 12/10/2019 5:58:00 PM
Achoo. To the fire. Achoo. To the dust. Achoo to the ragweed it has got my nose running and my eyes a watering. Nice one.
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 12/11/2019 12:29:00 PM
Thanks for your comments. Yes all get the eyes and noses running. love phyl
Date: 9/23/2019 12:53:00 PM
I can especially relate to your last haiku Phyl. I have allergies to ragweed. These are wonderful. Have a beautiful week! : ) xxoo
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 9/27/2019 12:08:00 PM
I have allergies to ragweed too. Have a great weekend. love phyl
Date: 9/23/2019 5:49:00 AM
Ought to be careful. Good one.
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 9/23/2019 12:35:00 PM
Thanks and yes we have ragweed and combine dust at the moment. Not good for allergies. love phyl
Date: 9/8/2019 10:34:00 AM
that ragweed one. AhChoooo!!
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 9/23/2019 12:35:00 PM
Thanks my friend and yes lots of ah chooo to ragweed and combine dust at the moment. Have a great week. love phyl
Date: 9/8/2019 7:45:00 AM
Nice one Phyllis...watch out for the ragweed...
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 9/23/2019 12:34:00 PM
Thanks and yes have been lots of ah choo with that ragweed now it is combine dust. Lucky us. lol love phyl
Date: 9/7/2019 3:17:00 PM
- Scary with all the fires we have - Autumn is here - Three great haiku - Have a wonderful weekend, dear Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 9/23/2019 12:33:00 PM
Thanks I am late in my comments. Yes many fires this year with lots of smoke in the air. love phyl

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