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Haiku 79

smoke
on the horizon
forest fire

harvest dust
field in motion
combines

ragweed
in full bloom
allergy

autumnhaiku

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Joseph May

March 2, 2020 at 8:17 AM

Very nicely penned Phyllis..best wishes

Bette Bavington

December 10, 2019 at 5:58 PM

Achoo. To the fire. Achoo. To the dust. Achoo to the ragweed it has got my nose running and my eyes a watering. Nice one.

Phyllis Babcock

December 11, 2019 at 12:29 PM

Thanks for your comments. Yes all get the eyes and noses running. love phyl

Connie Marcum Wong

September 23, 2019 at 12:53 PM

I can especially relate to your last haiku Phyl. I have allergies to ragweed. These are wonderful. Have a beautiful week! : ) xxoo

Phyllis Babcock

September 27, 2019 at 12:08 PM

I have allergies to ragweed too. Have a great weekend. love phyl

Swetha Vangaveti

September 23, 2019 at 5:49 AM

Ought to be careful. Good one.

Phyllis Babcock

September 23, 2019 at 12:35 PM

Thanks and yes we have ragweed and combine dust at the moment. Not good for allergies. love phyl

Andrea Dietrich

September 8, 2019 at 10:34 AM

that ragweed one. AhChoooo!!

Phyllis Babcock

September 23, 2019 at 12:35 PM

Thanks my friend and yes lots of ah chooo to ragweed and combine dust at the moment. Have a great week. love phyl

Arturo Michael

September 8, 2019 at 7:45 AM

Nice one Phyllis...watch out for the ragweed...

Phyllis Babcock

September 23, 2019 at 12:34 PM

Thanks and yes have been lots of ah choo with that ragweed now it is combine dust. Lucky us. lol love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen

September 7, 2019 at 3:17 PM

- Scary with all the fires we have - Autumn is here - Three great haiku - Have a wonderful weekend, dear Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

September 23, 2019 at 12:33 PM

Thanks I am late in my comments. Yes many fires this year with lots of smoke in the air. love phyl

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