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Haiku 78

summer storm upon the horizon lightning strikes raindrops on the windshield flash flood thunder above the clouds drum solo

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/27/2019 12:46:00 AM

These haiku are simply wonderful Phyl! I especially enjoyed the last one. : ) xxoo

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 8/27/2019 12:11:00 PM

Thanks Connie getting more rain today but no drum solos only nice soft rain. love phyl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/26/2019 6:14:00 PM

ohhh, that last one is fantastic. I like all of them how they gave the sequence of events. Long time no see. I hope you are doing great in your life, Phyllis

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 8/26/2019 7:25:00 PM

Thanks Andrea will have to give you a quick note. Yes have not written to much this past while. love phyl

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/26/2019 2:44:00 PM

Sometimes that thunder does sound like a very loud drum solo and scares Hairy the Chihuahua from Hades to death and he feels it is his duty to bark the thunder away. Thanks for dropping by. I am healing from the broken pelvis. Sara

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 8/26/2019 7:26:00 PM

So sorry to hear that you broke your pelvis Sara. Praying for quick healing. Thanks for your comment. love phyl

Jack Horne

Date: 8/26/2019 2:12:00 PM

wonderful vivid descriptions

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 8/26/2019 7:26:00 PM

Thanks Jack sent a email today. love phyl

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/19/2019 9:05:00 AM

Phyllis, your summer storm haiku are spectacular in imagery that light up the sense. Superb! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 8/26/2019 11:13:00 AM

Thanks for your comment Susan. love phyl