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Haiku 78

summer storm
upon the horizon
lightning strikes

raindrops 
on the windshield
flash flood

thunder
above the clouds
drum solo

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Connie Marcum Wong

August 27, 2019 at 12:46 AM

These haiku are simply wonderful Phyl! I especially enjoyed the last one. : ) xxoo

Phyllis Babcock

August 27, 2019 at 12:11 PM

Thanks Connie getting more rain today but no drum solos only nice soft rain. love phyl

Andrea Dietrich

August 26, 2019 at 6:14 PM

ohhh, that last one is fantastic. I like all of them how they gave the sequence of events. Long time no see. I hope you are doing great in your life, Phyllis

Phyllis Babcock

August 26, 2019 at 7:25 PM

Thanks Andrea will have to give you a quick note. Yes have not written to much this past while. love phyl

Sara Kendrick

August 26, 2019 at 2:44 PM

Sometimes that thunder does sound like a very loud drum solo and scares Hairy the Chihuahua from Hades to death and he feels it is his duty to bark the thunder away. Thanks for dropping by. I am healing from the broken pelvis. Sara

Phyllis Babcock

August 26, 2019 at 7:26 PM

So sorry to hear that you broke your pelvis Sara. Praying for quick healing. Thanks for your comment. love phyl