Haiku 76

temporary blindness
view obstructed
fog

ice patch
loss of control
accident

snow bank
at the intersection
brakes fail

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Date: 6/24/2021 2:00:00 PM
Very moving Haiku. I hope nobody was injured.
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Date: 3/10/2019 12:43:00 PM
gosh, I see even this far back I have not commented yet!! Did this really happen to you this year, Phyllis?
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 3/17/2019 12:54:00 PM
No just watching others hit the break and slide into a bank. Was some long winter for sure. love phyl
Date: 1/19/2019 12:27:00 PM
Great Haiku. I can see it :)
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 1/22/2019 3:18:00 PM
Thanks for your comment on my series of haiku. A bit warmer today but tomorrow back to the deep freeze. love phyl
Date: 1/15/2019 10:14:00 PM
I have been watching all of the stormy weather with all the accidents in the snow on the news Phyl. These haiku impress on our vision the dangers! Well done! : ) xxoo
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 1/19/2019 11:53:00 AM
Thanks Connie we are into freezing cold weather at the moment. It is not pleasant out at the moment for sure. Need some warmth. love phyl
Date: 1/14/2019 4:28:00 PM
phyl, take heed during the height of winter... a really remarkable 'ku chain.. huggs
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 1/19/2019 11:53:00 AM
Thank you Nette. It is freezing out here and glad to stay indoors. love phyl
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