Haiku 76

temporary blindness view obstructed fog ice patch loss of control accident snow bank at the intersection brakes fail

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Jo Chamberlain

Date: 6/24/2021 2:00:00 PM

Very moving Haiku. I hope nobody was injured.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/10/2019 12:43:00 PM

gosh, I see even this far back I have not commented yet!! Did this really happen to you this year, Phyllis?

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 3/17/2019 12:54:00 PM

No just watching others hit the break and slide into a bank. Was some long winter for sure. love phyl

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/19/2019 12:27:00 PM

Great Haiku. I can see it :)

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 1/22/2019 3:18:00 PM

Thanks for your comment on my series of haiku. A bit warmer today but tomorrow back to the deep freeze. love phyl

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/15/2019 10:14:00 PM

I have been watching all of the stormy weather with all the accidents in the snow on the news Phyl. These haiku impress on our vision the dangers! Well done! : ) xxoo

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 1/19/2019 11:53:00 AM

Thanks Connie we are into freezing cold weather at the moment. It is not pleasant out at the moment for sure. Need some warmth. love phyl

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/14/2019 4:28:00 PM

phyl, take heed during the height of winter... a really remarkable 'ku chain.. huggs

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 1/19/2019 11:53:00 AM

Thank you Nette. It is freezing out here and glad to stay indoors. love phyl