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Haiku 76

temporary blindness
view obstructed
fog

ice patch
loss of control
accident

snow bank
at the intersection
brakes fail

winterhaiku

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Jo Chamberlain

June 24, 2021 at 2:00 PM

Very moving Haiku. I hope nobody was injured.

Andrea Dietrich

March 10, 2019 at 12:43 PM

gosh, I see even this far back I have not commented yet!! Did this really happen to you this year, Phyllis?

Phyllis Babcock

March 17, 2019 at 12:54 PM

No just watching others hit the break and slide into a bank. Was some long winter for sure. love phyl

Heidi Sands

January 19, 2019 at 12:27 PM

Great Haiku. I can see it :)

Phyllis Babcock

January 22, 2019 at 3:18 PM

Thanks for your comment on my series of haiku. A bit warmer today but tomorrow back to the deep freeze. love phyl

Connie Marcum Wong

January 15, 2019 at 10:14 PM

I have been watching all of the stormy weather with all the accidents in the snow on the news Phyl. These haiku impress on our vision the dangers! Well done! : ) xxoo

Phyllis Babcock

January 19, 2019 at 11:53 AM

Thanks Connie we are into freezing cold weather at the moment. It is not pleasant out at the moment for sure. Need some warmth. love phyl