Haiku 74

squirrel
upon the roof
house hunting

mouse
at the door
cat waits

fall
leaves cascade
soft carpet
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Onclaud Avatar
October 2, 2018 at 4:07 PM
phyl, love the word choices and images of your ku... keep them coming; wow!..huggs
Babcock Avatar
October 12, 2018 at 11:39 AM
Thanks Nette . Ku is one of the forms I keep having trouble with but working on it. Have a great weekend. love phyl
Andresen Avatar
October 2, 2018 at 12:19 PM
- The cat is doing his job ... poor mice :) - Lovely dear Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Babcock Avatar
October 12, 2018 at 11:37 AM
Yes having a cat will do the job nicely. love phyl
Vaso Avatar
September 30, 2018 at 10:03 PM
This is so sweet! For me is just says "Canada"
Babcock Avatar
October 12, 2018 at 11:36 AM
Thanks and yes sounds like us for sure. Leaves have almost all fallen and frost on the car windows. Not liking thoughts of winter. love phyl
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