Haiku 70

Haiku 70 writer’s block -- how it grieves my heart dead end road

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/2/2013 12:05:00 PM

- It happens all ..... - Great haiku Jack! - Wishing you a beautiful weekend! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/2/2013 11:10:00 AM

and after the angs, the pen blooms again... such a remarkable way to depict this impasse... wonderfully done, jack!..:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/31/2013 2:43:00 PM

Yes, I think only we that enjoy writing know the pain of this!!

Karen Anglesey

Date: 7/31/2013 6:34:00 AM

You nailed this frustration perfectly. Awesome word use :)

Jack Jordan
Date: 7/31/2013 7:49:00 AM

Thanks, Karen. I sincerely hope it goes away soon... Jack

Donna Jones

Date: 7/30/2013 11:32:00 AM

Well....this doesn't sound like writers block Jack....wonderful! Like it a lot....you been getting as many OK storms as me?

Jack Jordan
Date: 7/30/2013 5:17:00 PM

Thanks, Donna. Oh yes... Lots of STORMS. My dogs go nuts, except for the old deaf one... Jack

Poet Tacito

Date: 7/30/2013 12:22:00 AM

Fantastic job! =D I'm very impressed.

Jack Jordan
Date: 7/30/2013 5:00:00 AM

Thanks, Drake. That means a lot coming from you... Jack

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 7/29/2013 5:09:00 PM

smiling while knowing how the dead end road stetches before most of us at some point. BG

Jack Jordan
Date: 7/29/2013 5:28:00 PM

It's happened to me before; it fades after a while. It helped to write about it. Thanks for the comment... Jack