Haiku 69

Haiku 69
	
	
	my warm fingertips...
	patterns traced on your damp skin
	dewey pink petals

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Kiran Bantawa

September 25, 2013 at 5:51 PM

nice one. congrats.

Jack Jordan

September 25, 2013 at 6:36 PM

Thanks, Kiran... Jack

Sandra Adams

September 25, 2013 at 9:13 AM

great haiku...congrats on your win :)

Jack Jordan

September 25, 2013 at 5:28 PM

Thanks for he comment, Sandra... jack

Dr.Ram Mehta

September 25, 2013 at 4:45 AM

Congrats on the win in the contest, Jack

Jack Jordan

September 25, 2013 at 5:28 PM

Thank you... Jack

Shadow Hamilton

September 25, 2013 at 4:36 AM

super haiku congrats on win Shadow x smile

Anne-Lise Andresen

September 25, 2013 at 3:27 AM

- Congratulations on your win, Jack - well done! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Jack Jordan

September 25, 2013 at 5:27 PM

Thanks, Anne-Lise... jack

Andrea Dietrich

September 24, 2013 at 11:41 PM

Gorgeous one, Jack. Congrats.

Jack Jordan

September 25, 2013 at 5:27 PM

Thanks, Andrea... jack

Skat A

September 24, 2013 at 5:48 PM

Jack, one amazing haiku.... Congratulations:) ~~love SKAT

Jack Jordan

September 25, 2013 at 5:31 PM

IO appreciate your selecting my poem. It's a real honor... Jack

Jack Jordan

September 25, 2013 at 5:26 PM

Thank you... jack

Delysia Hendricks

July 24, 2013 at 12:18 PM

Simply beautiful, Jack. I like, I like, I like. Licia :-)

Jack Jordan

July 24, 2013 at 12:36 PM

Thanks again for the very nice comment... Jack

Laura Mckenzie

July 24, 2013 at 6:54 AM

Nice! Laura

Jack Jordan

July 24, 2013 at 12:02 PM

Thanks, Laura, for reading my haiku... Jack

Christine Phillips

July 23, 2013 at 3:05 AM

Hi Jack, this is a nice Haiku with strong symbolic meaning."Patterns traced on damp skin"

Jack Jordan

July 24, 2013 at 12:02 PM

Thanks for the comment, Christine... Jack

Andrea Dietrich

July 23, 2013 at 12:28 AM

you just keep putting out the best haiku. this is evocative.

Jack Jordan

July 23, 2013 at 7:48 AM

Thanks again, as always... Jack

Poet Destroyer A

July 22, 2013 at 9:50 AM

sounds very beautiful, enjoyed your lovely haiku .... ~always, Linda

Jack Jordan

September 25, 2013 at 5:24 PM

Thanks, Linda. I always appreciate your comments... jack

Poet Tacito

July 22, 2013 at 9:44 AM

As a man, I can comfortably admit I got goosebumps. Well done, sir! =D

Jack Jordan

July 22, 2013 at 9:49 AM

Goosebumps are good things, Drake. I'm glad they happened, and thanks for the congrats... Jack

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 22, 2013 at 3:39 AM

- It's just ..... beautiful Jack !!!! - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Jack Jordan

July 22, 2013 at 9:48 AM

Thanks! That's a very nice compliment, comin from you especially... Jack

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