Haiku 69

Haiku 69
	
	
	my warm fingertips...
	patterns traced on your damp skin
	dewey pink petals

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Kiran Bantawa

Date: 9/25/2013 5:51:00 PM

nice one. congrats.

Jack Jordan
Date: 9/25/2013 6:36:00 PM

Thanks, Kiran... Jack

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/25/2013 9:13:00 AM

great haiku...congrats on your win :)

Jack Jordan
Date: 9/25/2013 5:28:00 PM

Thanks for he comment, Sandra... jack

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/25/2013 4:45:00 AM

Congrats on the win in the contest, Jack

Jack Jordan
Date: 9/25/2013 5:28:00 PM

Thank you... Jack

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 9/25/2013 4:36:00 AM

super haiku congrats on win Shadow x smile

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/25/2013 3:27:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win, Jack - well done! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Jack Jordan
Date: 9/25/2013 5:27:00 PM

Thanks, Anne-Lise... jack

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/24/2013 11:41:00 PM

Gorgeous one, Jack. Congrats.

Jack Jordan
Date: 9/25/2013 5:27:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea... jack

Skat A

Date: 9/24/2013 5:48:00 PM

Jack, one amazing haiku.... Congratulations:) ~~love SKAT

Jack Jordan
Date: 9/25/2013 5:31:00 PM

IO appreciate your selecting my poem. It's a real honor... Jack

Jack Jordan
Date: 9/25/2013 5:26:00 PM

Thank you... jack

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 7/24/2013 12:18:00 PM

Simply beautiful, Jack. I like, I like, I like. Licia :-)

Jack Jordan
Date: 7/24/2013 12:36:00 PM

Thanks again for the very nice comment... Jack

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 7/24/2013 6:54:00 AM

Nice! Laura

Jack Jordan
Date: 7/24/2013 12:02:00 PM

Thanks, Laura, for reading my haiku... Jack

Christine Phillips

Date: 7/23/2013 3:05:00 AM

Hi Jack, this is a nice Haiku with strong symbolic meaning."Patterns traced on damp skin"

Jack Jordan
Date: 7/24/2013 12:02:00 PM

Thanks for the comment, Christine... Jack

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/23/2013 12:28:00 AM

you just keep putting out the best haiku. this is evocative.

Jack Jordan
Date: 7/23/2013 7:48:00 AM

Thanks again, as always... Jack

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/22/2013 9:50:00 AM

sounds very beautiful, enjoyed your lovely haiku .... ~always, Linda

Jack Jordan
Date: 9/25/2013 5:24:00 PM

Thanks, Linda. I always appreciate your comments... jack

Poet Tacito

Date: 7/22/2013 9:44:00 AM

As a man, I can comfortably admit I got goosebumps. Well done, sir! =D

Jack Jordan
Date: 7/22/2013 9:49:00 AM

Goosebumps are good things, Drake. I'm glad they happened, and thanks for the congrats... Jack

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/22/2013 3:39:00 AM

- It's just ..... beautiful Jack !!!! - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Jack Jordan
Date: 7/22/2013 9:48:00 AM

Thanks! That's a very nice compliment, comin from you especially... Jack

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