Haiku 66

Haiku 66
	
	
	opening lotus
	our intimate exchange
	dew on petals

sensualhaiku

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James Marshall Goff

July 23, 2013 at 5:59 AM

cool, Jack!

Jack Jordan

July 23, 2013 at 7:46 AM

Thank you, James, for reading and commenting... Jack

Mitch White

July 23, 2013 at 5:13 AM

Yes the lotus. Great vision of the moment. Congrats to you.

Jack Jordan

July 23, 2013 at 7:46 AM

Thank you, Mitch. I appreciate your reading it... Jack

Andrea Dietrich

July 22, 2013 at 11:19 PM

Whoaaaa. THIS IS GREAT STUFF. A super well deserved win, And congrats.

Jack Jordan

July 23, 2013 at 7:45 AM

Well, thanks a lot. It means a lot coming from a friend... Jack

Debbie Guzzi

July 22, 2013 at 6:37 PM

oooh la la! http://haikujournal.org/submissions/ I think you are ready to publish try here Jack! Light & Love

Jack Jordan

July 22, 2013 at 8:50 PM

Thanks, Debbie. I will... Jack

Kash Poet

July 22, 2013 at 11:27 AM

Very nice Jack.Congrats on the win.

Jack Jordan

July 22, 2013 at 12:12 PM

Thanks you, Kash. Jack

Connie Gildersleeve

July 22, 2013 at 6:27 AM

Jack congratulations on your fantastic Haiku and win. Well deserve. Warm Smiles, Connie

Jack Jordan

July 22, 2013 at 9:46 AM

Thanks, Connie. I'm checking on photos today... Jack

Sara Kendrick

July 22, 2013 at 5:30 AM

Very creative work..Congrats on your great win..Sara

Jack Jordan

July 22, 2013 at 9:45 AM

Thanks for the congrats, Sara... Jack

Tim Ryerson

July 22, 2013 at 2:41 AM

Ditto to your comment Jake...Honored to share the spot with you and your beautiful, sensual haiku...I think PD is a very wise judge, don't you? - Tim

Jack Jordan

July 22, 2013 at 9:45 AM

Thanks, Tim. I agree with you about Linda, not to mention her extraordinary contributions to poetry soup... Jack

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 22, 2013 at 1:01 AM

- A winning haiku, with great quality Jack - CONGRATULATIONS! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Jack Jordan

July 22, 2013 at 9:43 AM

Thanks, Anne-Lise... Jack

Donna Jones

July 21, 2013 at 9:19 PM

Wow Jack...nice description....congratulations

Jack Jordan

July 21, 2013 at 10:06 PM

Thank you, Donna, and congrats to you too... Jack

Poet Destroyer A

July 21, 2013 at 7:51 PM

Howdy, Jack :-) thank you for the wonderful haiku. It's a delight having you support my contest. If you have time please enjoy my latest blog titled "BEYOND SUFFERING" all my winners are announced in order. Goodnight ~ always & forever **LINDA

Jack Jordan

July 21, 2013 at 9:13 PM

Linda, This is quite an honor, coming from you. Thanks... I'm honored... Jack