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Haiku 60 - Indiana Summer

Haiku 60 – Indiana Summer Indiana orange roadside lilies rural splendor Indiana elephant’s eye corn no tassels yet Indiana endless green soybean fields rich farmland soil a strange beauty stark yet soothing vistas Indiana For SKAT – OZ’s “summer poems” contest...

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Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 8/8/2013 5:02:00 PM

This is beautiful. I have been to Indiana. Are you from there? ... Lucilla

Jack Jordan
Date: 8/8/2013 9:28:00 PM

My wife is from Indiana, so I have been there many times visiting family. I never fail to be amazed at how beautiful absolutely flat land can be. Thanks for commenting... Jack

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/12/2013 10:32:00 PM

wow... I love this one, very different summer poem... a favorite... and it's not cause my mom was part Indian... wink! wink!... I am attacked to the sun, and colors in all 4 haiku. the life beats within me... xox~ LINDA

Jack Jordan
Date: 7/12/2013 11:21:00 PM

Summer vistas in Indiana are mesmerizingly beautiful. Winter is harsh and bleak, or so I'm told...

Donna Jones

Date: 7/10/2013 4:55:00 PM

Jack these are wonderful...I enjoyed every word....

Jack Jordan
Date: 7/10/2013 4:59:00 PM

Thank you, Donna. I hope all is well with you. I haven't heard from you in a while... Jack

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/7/2013 2:21:00 PM

Ahhh!! Great descriptive work about your home?..Those daylilies are beautiful..Sara

Jack Jordan
Date: 7/7/2013 2:30:00 PM

My mother-in-law's home, which we were visiting when I wrote this. Thanks for the comment... Jack

Matthew Anish

Date: 7/4/2013 5:47:00 PM

Excellent short - very descriptive poems here! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Jack Jordan
Date: 7/7/2013 6:30:00 AM

Thans you, Matthew.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/4/2013 10:18:00 AM

a great way to do the summer contest!! My favorite is "elephant's eye" one.

Jack Jordan
Date: 7/4/2013 5:35:00 PM

That's my favorite too...