Haiku 5

In its final soar 
Finds the limb it learned to fly 
Lands, to fly no more 


Gene Bourne
06-08-14




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Raul Moreno

April 4, 2020 at 10:54 AM

A definite cycle of life you have captured with your pen, in my favorite form. Wonderful use of imagery as well in this tiny masterpiece. Painting a picture in so few words is difficult but you seem to be on your way to be painting many. Thanks for sharing your gifts with us. This one will go straight to my favorites.

Pandita Sietesantos

August 6, 2014 at 6:56 AM

I am a haiku lover and I love this inspirational piece - Bravo, my friend! Pandita

Gene Bourne

August 6, 2014 at 12:17 PM

I love them to. Trying to condense a "heart grabbing" message in so few words is a challenge...and I love trying to find the right words that blend into a message readers might be enticed by. Thanks for your comment, Pandita....YF....Gene.