Haiku 59

frigid cold
upon the plains
noses drip
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 frost
upon tree branches
birds chirp
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icicles
on the roof
crystal dagger
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snowman
on my lawn
artwork
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22/01/16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
March 4, 2016 at 8:09 PM
cute visions of winter!! except for first one haha
Squyres Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 11:59 AM
Well done haiku series... brrrr... they make me cold !! lol
Bickerstaffe Avatar
January 23, 2016 at 2:43 PM
A super series oh HAIKUS! I'm glad to see you don't stick to the usual 575 style but branch out on your own! Beautiful imagery. BRAVO Phyl!! Best wishes, Keith
Andresen Avatar
January 22, 2016 at 2:08 PM
- We have had snow and real winter weather in 14 days ..... today the rain came ..... roads have become slippery ice ..... dangerous to go out - A great Haiku, dear Phyllis - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Lane Avatar
January 22, 2016 at 11:03 AM
Very nice ones, Phyllis.
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