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Haiku 56 about Love

Her hands upon his window-sill a climbing jasmine

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/18/2014 4:25:00 PM
A beautifully delicious gratifying Haiku.
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Date: 7/27/2014 10:23:00 AM
Short and perfect.Good one!
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Date: 3/19/2014 3:30:00 PM
Nice dear...Enjoyed them...
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Date: 2/26/2014 2:41:00 PM
Ahh.......many double meanings here.....I love this !!
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Date: 2/25/2014 10:49:00 AM
- A lovely haiku <3 <3 <3!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/22/2014 8:48:00 AM
Prosit Charmaine. Remain faithful to Haiku; you two get on so well together!
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Date: 2/20/2014 8:19:00 AM
A beautifully written Haiku my dear Charmaine! I'm one of your biggest fans! But you knew that, right! Big loving hugs and kisses! Jack XOXOX
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Date: 2/19/2014 1:50:00 AM
Excellent, love it.
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Date: 2/14/2014 9:56:00 AM
Now this one is superb! Can't decide which is better, this or the last I read. This poem focuses in on the small, yet beautiful details in such a way that allows me to see a bigger picture. Talented, I say. I sense a favor coming again.
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Date: 2/1/2014 3:25:00 PM
he must be FINE!!!!
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Date: 1/30/2014 11:39:00 PM
Oh wow, what a romantic poem. It sounds to me that she is climbing up to her love, but she is just out of reach. Such a lovely write, Haikus are hard to write, but Charma you have no problem with them! I love this poem, a brilliant write! :) xoxo
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Date: 1/26/2014 8:02:00 AM
This one is so special I wanted to read it again.
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Date: 1/25/2014 9:41:00 AM
What a great imagination......I love the way that jasmine could be the flower, or the girl......perfectly done !!! Well deserving a place of honor!!
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Date: 1/25/2014 8:05:00 AM
Glad your back and writing great pieces like this. Congrats. BG
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Date: 1/25/2014 7:47:00 AM
- Charmaine - Congratulations on your beautiful winning poem in: Nothing But Love Contest - Sponsored by: Andrea Dietrich - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/25/2014 3:15:00 AM
Outstanding entry deserving of your wonderful win. Kudos!
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Date: 1/24/2014 9:53:00 PM
Lovely haiku, Charmaine. Congrats!
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Date: 1/24/2014 8:02:00 PM
Congratulations, Char, on the fine win,
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Date: 1/24/2014 7:44:00 PM
this one is a GORGEOUS GEM, Charma. I'm so happy you entered it in my contest. I remember how you entered another stunning one in a haiku contest I had several years ago. You are a talent!! Congrats on second place.
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Date: 1/24/2014 2:23:00 PM
Just beautiful Charmine!
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Date: 1/22/2014 3:16:00 AM
perfection.
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Date: 1/20/2014 9:38:00 PM
Wow, this is a masterful Haiku my friend! I truly loved reading this wondrous poem this evening Charmaine! What a glorious piece, quite the incredible poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 1/20/2014 1:25:00 PM
Nice
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Date: 1/20/2014 12:41:00 PM
Such few words can paint such a big picture. I loved it....Hugs...Roger
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Date: 1/20/2014 12:24:00 PM
thats very sweet and beautiful
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