Haiku 56

damp snow****
upon her cheeks
hidden tears***
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Bickerstaffe Avatar
November 29, 2015 at 11:26 AM
so sad... a superb HAIKU 2/4/3. Outstanding imagery and phrasing. BRAVO Phyl! Keith 7
Horne Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 3:50 PM
oh, love this
Meade Avatar
November 19, 2015 at 8:05 PM
So few words but so much meaning . . . tears of sorrow, tears of joy . . .
Dietrich Avatar
November 19, 2015 at 5:39 PM
Wonderful, Phyllis. Heartfelt too I bet.
Gorelick Avatar
November 19, 2015 at 2:17 PM
Beautiful! BG
Andresen Avatar
November 19, 2015 at 1:53 PM
- A touching picture, dear Phyllis - I wish you a peaceful and restful weekend - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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