Haiku 4

sheet lightning flashes
silhouetting silver clouds--
one star winks bravely

Copyright, July 27, 2014
Faye Lanham Gibson

couragestarstormhaiku

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Andrea Dietrich

August 26, 2014 at 5:43 PM

this one deserved to be MUCH higher. Love it, Faye , It uses original thought and great personification.And congrats on the winners' list.

Jan Allison

August 25, 2014 at 8:58 AM

wonderful imagery Faye I especially love the star winking Many congratulations:-) Hugs jan xxx

Earl Schumacker

August 24, 2014 at 4:33 PM

Hi Faye, Very clever Haiku. Nicely done. Congratulations on your well deserved win. Take care. Earl

Poet Destroyer A

August 24, 2014 at 3:41 PM

Faye, Congratulations, thank you for supporting my contest "IN THE CLOUDS!" Take care and enjoy my blog, "Pillow Fights" If you like or have the time. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Richard Lamoureux

August 3, 2014 at 7:47 PM

I know what you mean by not enough time in the day. Sheet lightning is really cool as is this poem.

Poet Destroyer A

July 29, 2014 at 7:19 PM

Love it.. Can't wait to close this contest...Linda

Robert Nehls

July 28, 2014 at 6:48 AM

Very good, Faye. Just like in life, one shining star can change our outlook on whatever storm we may be encountering. There is much said in this Haiku, my friend. Enjoyed it.... Robert.

Casarah Nance

July 28, 2014 at 6:46 AM

That is spectacular, I'm sure I'll be back to grats in on the winners list my friend! :)

Faye Gibson

July 29, 2014 at 3:23 PM

Thanks, Casarah...I have been reading some of your recent writes...very good. Hope to get back and comment soon. There just is not enough time in the day!!

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