Haiku # 4

Falcon  glides  on  high 

Life  and  death  will  clash  for  lunch

She  swoops  to  conquer  .
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Dietrich Avatar
June 12, 2010 at 10:27 PM
and I bet she wins out!
Gass Avatar
February 17, 2009 at 10:57 AM
Awesome visuals, Sean! A magnificent sight! Happy Haikuing! Love, QR
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November 16, 2008 at 10:07 AM
Powerful use of just three lines. Love the second line. Much to think about here. Good job! Karen
Fawcett Avatar
October 30, 2008 at 5:18 AM
Now that is great writing!!! Nigel
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