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haiku 4 -2020

weather's changeable sky a multitude of grays could be rain or snow

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Date: 1/5/2020 3:49:00 AM
thank you Ritsuko. I enjoy your comments, they are always so thoughtful and re-read the haiku with your comments in mind. Everyone reads a poem differently and not always at the same level. Just so you know the snow did not come. Perhaps it will later today:)
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Rituko Shindo
Date: 1/5/2020 4:13:00 AM
I really enjoy your poems.Thank you.
Date: 1/5/2020 3:14:00 AM
What would she do if it was raining? What would she do if it was snow? Will her feelings change with the weather? Or will her feelings be fixed and not change? Will she go out? Will somebody visit her? I read this poem like a novel. Lovely haiku. Thank you.(^^)
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