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Haiku 48

damp footprints
over dead leaves
fall's farewell

autumnhaiku

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Nurudeen Olaniran

October 29, 2014 at 6:22 AM

somebody was at home when i was not around. Spirit!. good one Phylis

Sara Kendrick

October 25, 2014 at 6:50 AM

Enjoyed reading your Haiku..I bet that some of those stuck onto the shoe and got deposited in the house..Imagination gone wild that's me..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

October 23, 2014 at 7:55 PM

Phyllis, thanks so much for reading so MANY of my poems today and for all the sweet things you said. You are such a dear. I really like how you describe fall in this little haiku. Let me go among your oldies and reread one of them at least!!

Len Gasun

October 22, 2014 at 10:16 PM

A sad goodbye to a very wonderful season and a warmth welcome to another wonderful one my dear friend, Phyllis. Thank you so much for the vicarious experience you lovingly shared through your awesome haiku. Sending you many hugs! Hope you're doin well my very dear friend. love lots, Leonora