Haiku

images of lines drawn in sand dunes haiku on Mars!

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Femia Cools

Date: 1/7/2016 9:38:00 AM

Thank you all. I am moving at the moment. Will take some time to get going again. this one just popped up before my eyes: you give me a very big scare tiny moth

Skat A

Date: 1/7/2016 8:32:00 AM

:) SKAT

Skat A

Date: 6/14/2013 10:56:00 PM

Hey Femia, your haiku is awesome. SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/14/2013 9:56:00 PM

Femia, love the haiku... Never have i thought of haiku-ing a planet.. i love it. Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest in the future* hopefully I can be one of your first poetry soup friends. You are welcomed to look for me anytime you need certain feedback on any given poem. I look forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love- LOL) * Always * ;-) Linda

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 6/12/2013 7:14:00 PM

Welcome to poetry soup Femia.It was a pleasure to read your first poem here.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/12/2013 1:23:00 PM

- Welcome to P-Soup, Femia! - Hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your poems here with us. - Welcome to read some of mine, if you will. - Looking forward to many poems from you in the future. - Thanks for your first! - A really good Haiku. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)