Haiku

images of lines
drawn in sand dunes
haiku on Mars!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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January 7, 2016 at 9:38 AM
Thank you all. I am moving at the moment. Will take some time to get going again. this one just popped up before my eyes: you give me a very big scare tiny moth
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January 7, 2016 at 8:32 AM
:) SKAT
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June 14, 2013 at 10:56 PM
Hey Femia, your haiku is awesome. SKAT
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June 14, 2013 at 9:56 PM
Femia, love the haiku... Never have i thought of haiku-ing a planet.. i love it. Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest in the future* hopefully I can be one of your first poetry soup friends. You are welcomed to look for me anytime you need certain feedback on any given poem. I look forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love- LOL) * Always * ;-) Linda
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June 12, 2013 at 7:14 PM
Welcome to poetry soup Femia.It was a pleasure to read your first poem here.
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June 12, 2013 at 1:23 PM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Femia! - Hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your poems here with us. - Welcome to read some of mine, if you will. - Looking forward to many poems from you in the future. - Thanks for your first! - A really good Haiku. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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