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Haiku 47

cold autumn
golden leaves in grasp
of frost


05/10/14

autumnhaiku

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Andrea Dietrich

October 8, 2014 at 6:09 PM

This is really neat. I love how you said they were in the "grasp" of frost! Great seeing you here. Let me check if I already had viewed your previous one.

Gary Bateman

October 6, 2014 at 3:55 PM

Phyllis, Enjoyed your Haiku write here. A very short narrative (obviously), but a cogent image depicting transition change. A "7" from me and to let you know that I like the image rendered very much. Best Wishes, Gary