Haiku 47

cold autumn golden leaves in grasp of frost 05/10/14

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/8/2014 6:09:00 PM

This is really neat. I love how you said they were in the "grasp" of frost! Great seeing you here. Let me check if I already had viewed your previous one.

Gary Bateman

Date: 10/6/2014 3:55:00 PM

Phyllis, Enjoyed your Haiku write here. A very short narrative (obviously), but a cogent image depicting transition change. A "7" from me and to let you know that I like the image rendered very much. Best Wishes, Gary

Daver Austin

Date: 10/6/2014 3:31:00 PM

Enjoyed your haiku. O love haiku, how about you. Love, daver

Matthew Anish

Date: 10/5/2014 4:50:00 PM

Soon the frost will be here. Let us enjoy autumn for as long as we can. Succinct, stimulating words! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/5/2014 2:48:00 PM

- The frost has not come yet .... but, it will come soon - Beautiful picture in your haiku dear Phyllis! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)