Haiku 43

big blue moon shines across wheat field crickets chirp

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Daver Austin

Date: 9/8/2014 2:38:00 PM

Yes, and fire flies flicker too. Good stuff. Love, daver

Elaine George

Date: 8/27/2014 1:15:00 AM

Ah!!! I have been in t he wheat field in the prairies and seen that moon and heard those crickets. Thanks for the memory, Phylils bfn Lainie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/22/2014 1:36:00 AM

a romantic picture this offers us. So glad you have at least one new one for me to see, sweetie. Thanks for all your wonderful comments.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/21/2014 9:53:00 AM

A quiet and peaceful scene created, Phyllis

Leon Enriquez

Date: 8/20/2014 9:47:00 PM

Dear Phyllis: I can see that moon Now! Lovely haiku moment here. Leon

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/20/2014 1:45:00 PM

- A beautiful picture in this haiku, dear Phyllis! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)