Haiku 43

big blue moon
shines across wheat field
crickets chirp
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Austin Avatar
September 8, 2014 at 2:38 PM
Yes, and fire flies flicker too. Good stuff. Love, daver
George   Avatar
August 27, 2014 at 1:15 AM
Ah!!! I have been in t he wheat field in the prairies and seen that moon and heard those crickets. Thanks for the memory, Phylils bfn Lainie
Dietrich Avatar
August 22, 2014 at 1:36 AM
a romantic picture this offers us. So glad you have at least one new one for me to see, sweetie. Thanks for all your wonderful comments.
Mehta Avatar
August 21, 2014 at 9:53 AM
A quiet and peaceful scene created, Phyllis
Enriquez Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 9:47 PM
Dear Phyllis: I can see that moon Now! Lovely haiku moment here. Leon
Andresen Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 1:45 PM
- A beautiful picture in this haiku, dear Phyllis! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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