Haiku 43

life of the body
	touched by fire, your silk skin
	radiant sunsets
	
	
	life of the mind
	theory-colored universe
	time, warping
	
	
	life of the spirit
	shimmering, shining belief
	bluest of skies

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Donna Jones

April 30, 2013 at 10:03 PM

Really cool one Jack...

Jack Jordan

May 1, 2013 at 7:54 AM

Thanks, Donna. I appreciate the comment... Jack

Timothy Hicks

April 30, 2013 at 9:16 AM

Your haiku work is a lot more abstract than most. I don't always know where it's taking me yet at the same time I enjoy the ride. First and last are my favorites cause it has more concrete images. On a side note I wonder if there is a way to write a renga with just two poets? If you really wanna try it, it sounds like a much better practice than to jump ahead and try to get 10 other poets to tag along with you... let me know...

Jack Jordan

April 30, 2013 at 10:01 AM

I enjoy the abstraction. Perhaps that has to do with my former life as an architect, and still as a painter. The renga idea sounds okay to me. Let's give it a bit of thought, but it should work.

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