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Haiku 42

hot summer evening
along the gravel
road
deer graze


7/7/14

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Nurudeen Olaniran

August 16, 2014 at 12:29 PM

Good and real. Haiku. love Nurudeen

Gene Bourne

July 18, 2014 at 6:08 AM

Something is causing the deer to enter our town, running across suburban streets Very enjoyable Haiku, Phyl.....Yf...Gene.

Connie Marcum Wong

July 16, 2014 at 5:08 AM

A lovely summer haiku Phyllis. I love to watch deer. The deer at the grand canyon are so tame they practically let you pet them. I was amazed to see them wandering the parking lot with no fear of humans.

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 13, 2014 at 3:21 PM

- Phyllis , this haiku is so lovely !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Elaine George

July 13, 2014 at 2:41 PM

Lovely Haiku,Phyllis, Thank you for dropping by to read part 3/or 3 of "Out of the Darkness'. Actually that is the last part. In order to make sense of the first chapter of the novel I am currently writing, you need to read part 1 of 3, then 2 of 3 and then 3/3. I know it isn't poetry, but I wanted to get ffed back on my novel. bfn Elaine