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Haiku 42 - 1,2,3

1 a noiseless moment he writes in his diary incessant snow 2 every day he hoped every day she avoided… waning moon 3 his need for love he opened his careless mouth oak tree, splintered

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Date: 4/27/2013 2:24:00 AM
Clever write!
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Jack Jordan
Date: 4/27/2013 8:31:00 AM
Thanks, Susan... Jack
Date: 4/26/2013 5:32:00 PM
Need I say more ! Wonderful set dear poet, and I truly enjoyed its lead ! Have a wonderful weekend Jack.....much love, james
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Date: 4/26/2013 11:36:00 AM
Jack, I like all three ..... but, if I should choose one ..... was my selection: 3 - Wishing you a lovely weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Jack Jordan
Date: 4/26/2013 1:28:00 PM
Thanks... There are five in the series, the idea being to tell a story in haiku... Jack

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