Haiku

Haiku My two-timing lover if only he were here the music mocks tonight

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/10/2012 8:26:00 AM

Hello Annie, insanely true... great haiku,,,,pd

Annie Lander
Date: 10/11/2012 3:32:00 PM

thank you Poet

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/10/2012 8:15:00 AM

Interesting work and this could be a Senryu also..I hope that this is did not happen to you but just a write about what you have seen and heard..Thanks for stopping by..I like the cooler weather of fall and early spring but the heat of summer kills me now..Winter hurts my bones..Sad isn't it..Sara

Annie Lander
Date: 10/10/2012 8:19:00 AM

unfornuately as i wrote these few lines my x came to mind .. the two-timer winter is also a hard time for me, work and home and my computer.. what a life. Sara. sorry about your bones... however, keep smiling...and don't be embrass to slap on your Bengay pain relieving patch..it works wonders