Haiku 40 Till Haiku 47 Beneath the Sakura Tree

cherry blossoms drift upon the white casket -a fading pink hue --- she scatters his ashes where cherry blossoms bloom -life after life ---- early miscarriage -cherry blossoms wither before leaves bloom - - - my unborn child -cherry blossoms wither too soon - - - cherry blossoms in hues of pink -our baby girl - - - first cherry falls upon melting snowflakes -Spring's blossom --- cherry blossom -i lick fresh sweetness from his lips --- beneath the sakura tree i shape a heart of petals -without you Not for the contest but tnks Susan and friends you are an inspiration
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Horsman Avatar
June 19, 2013 at 10:26 AM
A string of wonder in each and everyone, loves these...
Fraser Avatar
June 15, 2013 at 4:14 PM
The beauty in a Sakura tree, reminds me of you.........lovely poetry.....Chowa..
K. Avatar
May 13, 2013 at 1:18 PM
I really enjoy reading your haiku dear Charma-- you definitely are inspired and I have a bunch here that I really liked, especially the last four ones, that last one was so vivid for me... thank you for passing by my poem and how you interpreted it was so beautiful. It can definitely be taken as that way...
Anish Avatar
May 12, 2013 at 10:22 PM
Excellent use of this form! I have never heard of a sakura tree before. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Zerbst Avatar
May 12, 2013 at 4:05 PM
Enjoyed reading your awesome haiku, Charmaine! Thanks for your recent stop. I'll read more of your new ones when I get the time.
Hunter Avatar
April 18, 2013 at 9:19 AM
My goodness, those are awesome, Charma...some of my favorites.
Dietrich Avatar
April 16, 2013 at 5:14 PM
these were so sweet, and I really liked those last four a lot, about the baby and the kisses, etc. why not enter the contest?? Have fun, Charma. Luv, Andrea
Chircop Avatar
April 18, 2013 at 10:12 AM
i m contest phobic i guess Andrea.I only entered your contest and there was another one as a tribute to Carolyn devonshire..but there was not going to be a winner there.I nearly entered debbie s contest today..re forming an old poem into a better poem.I had so many horrible to choosw from...to horrible to adjust axtually : )
Tacito Avatar
April 16, 2013 at 9:43 AM
Such a powerfully emotional set of lines here. The last one is mind blowing.
Ober Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 5:53 PM
BEAUTIFUL haiku set. You are one talented gal!!!
Goff Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 7:56 AM
Char, deeply felt...bravo! Jim
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April 13, 2013 at 8:28 PM
Charma, I'm happy to see you are enjoying the cherry blossom theme. Your haiku are wonderful and lovely. Enjoyed, all your haiku :-) Always & Forever! GOODNIGHT xox~LINDA"
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