Haiku 3

no phone call needed
secret of hidden key known
teddy bear on bed

©Donna Jones

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David William Breidenthal

July 8, 2013 at 7:45 PM

Love this style . Haiku is an awesome style and you made it sound awesomer by your simple words (that expose inspiration to the public). This sounds like you had a relaxing day that day. Calming poem and I like it very much. :) DWB

Kyle Kriticos

June 4, 2013 at 10:27 PM

I'm always impressed by a good hai ku writer. My friends, that's you :)

Timothy Hicks

June 1, 2013 at 12:05 AM

I used to have the biggest stuffed animal collection (sometimes I miss the feelings I got from it... though "unmanly" to admit... lol). A good description of home, methinks! A familiar friend who's always there... good haiku!

David William Breidenthal

July 8, 2013 at 7:46 PM

Haha me too! Stuffies are genius.

Robert Johnson

May 30, 2013 at 4:00 PM

Two hearts in kind wont seem to mind when distance is in trust. An hour or two until your due. And arms around you thrust.

Donna Jones

May 30, 2013 at 9:28 PM

Yes..thanks....

Bl Devnath

May 30, 2013 at 7:59 AM

Excellent and interesting haiku enjoyed a lot. Lovely worded. Congrats on your win. Thanks.....,loved always, bl

Donna Jones

May 30, 2013 at 9:29 PM

Thank you sir..

Sara Kendrick

May 30, 2013 at 6:29 AM

Hummmm!!! I could go so many ways with this one from scary to safety..Enjoyed reading this one that was intriguing this morn..Thanks for stopping by..I believe that you got my Cinquain "Toys"..Not many did...Sara

Donna Jones

May 30, 2013 at 9:33 PM

Well I hope its not too scary....its an extra key to the house I'm talking about, maybe that helps...and your toys the write struck home because my hubby has had not one but two TOY corvettes but finally traded back toa sensible truck....thanks Sara

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

May 29, 2013 at 5:48 PM

Congrats on your well deserved win. AO

Donna Jones

May 30, 2013 at 9:34 PM

Thanks sir

Connie Gildersleeve

May 28, 2013 at 6:01 PM

Donna what a lovely home sweet home Haiku. Congratulations on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie

Donna Jones

May 30, 2013 at 9:36 PM

Thanks Connie

Joseph May

May 28, 2013 at 1:54 PM

congrats on a fine win Donna

Donna Jones

May 28, 2013 at 5:43 PM

Thanks Joseph...:-)

Bl Devnath

May 28, 2013 at 1:39 PM

Congrats on your win, my friend. Loved always, bl

Donna Jones

May 28, 2013 at 5:39 PM

Thanks so much ..

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 28, 2013 at 1:21 PM

- Thanks for letting me visit your home - Congratulations on your win in the contest: "A Home" - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Donna Jones

May 28, 2013 at 5:34 PM

Very kind Anne Lise

Seosamh De Burca

May 28, 2013 at 1:18 PM

Excellent, well done, a beautiful Haiku. Congrats on your win.

Donna Jones

May 28, 2013 at 5:33 PM

Thank you very much

Len Gasun

May 28, 2013 at 1:05 PM

My big hearty congratulations my dear friend , Donna for your win and your very beautiful poem. I love it so much and I’ve extremely enjoyed. Thanks a lot for your full support! Love lots, Leonora

Donna Jones

May 28, 2013 at 5:33 PM

Thank you for the honor and for having us Leonora

Harry Horsman

May 28, 2013 at 9:14 AM

A poem of mixed emotions i sense,, anyhow love the imagery it has created for me..

Donna Jones

May 28, 2013 at 5:30 PM

Hey Harry...so good to see ya...thanks! Maybe the custom of leaving an extra house key hidden under a stone or something is only customary around here...

Demetrios Trifiatis

May 25, 2013 at 11:46 PM

Have you found your soul mate? That must be divine! Excellent writing! Good luck!

Donna Jones

May 28, 2013 at 5:27 PM

I did once...thanks Demetrios ....

Russell Sivey

May 24, 2013 at 9:24 PM

That's not necessarily a child's teddy bear though...because I have a teddy bear in our room that my wife gave me for my birthday one year...I keep it in the room to remind me of our romance that we share with one another! Ok, yeah, I usually sleep with it...don't tell anyone but I'm a softy! I know, does that make me any less of a man that I love my teddy bear...from my wife? This poem is awesome Donna, I really loved reading it this evening! What a delightful piece, Great Work!!

Donna Jones

May 25, 2013 at 7:47 PM

Nope...no less of a man!!! More!!!! And as for its for the home contest...I'm glad you find it reminds you of home...me too......my teddy's name is Matilda! Thanks Russell..

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