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Haiku 39

steam rising
off hot metal -
a dog lifts his leg

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/28/2015 6:17:00 PM
Hi, Timothy, stopping by to enjoy your dog haiku a second time. Hope you are well and had a wonderful thanksgiving holiday. SKAT
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Date: 9/14/2013 4:43:00 AM
This one made me chuckle.
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Date: 6/19/2013 7:31:00 AM
fun write, friend Tim.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 6/20/2013 11:57:00 PM
Thanks Michael... appreciate you stopping by!
Date: 6/12/2013 11:58:00 AM
Oh yeah... This reads more like a senryu than a haiku, but there's a fine line between. NIce work. Jack
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 6/12/2013 11:09:00 PM
Thanks Jack :)
Date: 6/12/2013 7:14:00 AM
Yes.. seen this same scenario before myself. True Haiku :)
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 6/12/2013 11:08:00 PM
It's always funny to witness, no matter how many walks in the park!
Date: 6/11/2013 10:25:00 PM
LOL! Darn good Haiku to me...hilarious. Always, Annalise
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 6/12/2013 11:08:00 PM
Thanks again Annalise.
Date: 6/11/2013 9:04:00 PM
Thanks for this humor haiku Hicks. Nicely penned. AO
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 6/12/2013 11:07:00 PM
Thanks Abdul :)
Date: 6/11/2013 7:55:00 PM
He must go, the urge is too great, he must urinate on that hot metal as it calls to him greatly! You have presented a brilliant write here my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this evening! What an outstanding piece, Great Work!!
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 6/12/2013 10:58:00 PM
Thanks Russell... what amazes me most is how dogs can literally hold it in and SPREAD out the pee in several locations... sounds too painful for me!
Date: 6/11/2013 3:36:00 PM
ha! very observant and very funny!
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 6/12/2013 10:57:00 PM
Being a pet owner these images come to mind...
Date: 6/11/2013 3:35:00 PM
Oh! Good one, Timothy! ;)
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 6/12/2013 10:57:00 PM
Thanks Eileen!
Date: 6/11/2013 3:32:00 PM
Timothy, lol, no matter what I'm taking a picture and using it as my avatar. I love pointing out at my surroundings when a dog or cat are squatting. and doing their business. Okay, and about that steam, I wouldn't want to be near the hydrant when the steam is rising in the air................ LOVE *SKAT
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 6/12/2013 10:57:00 PM
LOL! That does sound rather toxic now that I think about it. My little black dog once did this and I was like, "Wow! Try to be as stereotypical as possible. Dog, pee, fire hydrant"... thanks for stopping by SKAT!