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Haiku 38 - Clouds and Stones

Haiku 38 – Clouds and Stones
	
	
	cumulus clouds 
	softened shapes of river stones...
	a shared aesthetic
	

	
	For Barbara Gorelick’s contest, “Clouds.”

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Poet Destroyer A

August 31, 2013 at 9:07 AM

Jack, a lovely winning poem... thanks for sharing and the wonderful comment this morning... Soup mail...Linda

Poet Destroyer A

August 31, 2013 at 9:07 AM

soup mail

Sara Kendrick

August 29, 2013 at 11:30 AM

Congrats on your great winning work..Delightful work..Sara

Jack Jordan

August 29, 2013 at 12:19 PM

Thank you, Sara. I appreciate the comment... Jack

Danesh Morgan

August 27, 2013 at 7:00 PM

Jack Congrats to you on your win. Morgan

Carrie Richards

August 27, 2013 at 9:10 AM

Terrific haiku Jack !! This would have #1 in a haiku contest!!

Jack Jordan

August 27, 2013 at 9:15 AM

Thanks, Carrie. I'm beginning to learn to save my best haiku... Jack

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

August 27, 2013 at 12:43 AM

Congratulations on your place on the winners list Jack xx

Jack Jordan

August 27, 2013 at 8:09 AM

Thank you, Mandy... jack

Barbara Gorelick

August 26, 2013 at 10:13 PM

Jack, I loved your poem even though it wasn't in the requested form. Its a beaut! BG

Jack Jordan

August 26, 2013 at 10:18 PM

Thank you for the honor, Barbara. I replied on your blog that in the future I will give close attention to the instructions, although I'm generally know for doing otherwise... Jack