Haiku 36

moonlight through her hair,
shows she'll be beautiful
with age

agebeautyhaiku

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Paul Callus

February 5, 2016 at 1:10 PM

Full marks for this beautiful haiku, Timothy...a lovely image that leads to maturity and female beauty! // paul

Caleah Buil

June 12, 2013 at 9:00 AM

This was great! Never judge the nerdy and socially awkward 12 year old. Who knows when they get older how much they'll change and turn into something incredibly beautiful? Great Haiku!

Timothy Hicks

June 12, 2013 at 11:21 PM

I haven't thought of it in this way, actually. You bring new light to this haiku! :)

Timothy Hicks

June 5, 2013 at 11:17 PM

Thanks for all the kind comments y'all! :)

Jack Jordan

June 5, 2013 at 9:59 PM

Very nice... Haven't heard from you in a while. I hope all is well... Jack

Ilene Bauer

June 5, 2013 at 4:39 PM

oh, you're so wise for someone so young! this is wonderful...

Susan Palli

June 5, 2013 at 1:38 PM

Sweet!

Matthew Anish

June 5, 2013 at 1:28 PM

Nice short poem here. I think somer women age like fine wine. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Poet Tacito

June 5, 2013 at 8:28 AM

Oh yes. A woman should age like wine. Not just on the outside, but also within.

Russell Sivey

June 5, 2013 at 5:54 AM

I give this Haiku high marks my friend! A very awesome poem here Timothy! I truly enjoyed reading this enlightening write this morning! What a tremendous piece, Great Work!!