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Haiku 36

moonlight through her hair, shows she'll be beautiful with age

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Paul Callus

Date: 2/5/2016 1:10:00 PM

Full marks for this beautiful haiku, Timothy...a lovely image that leads to maturity and female beauty! // paul

Caleah Buil

Date: 6/12/2013 9:00:00 AM

This was great! Never judge the nerdy and socially awkward 12 year old. Who knows when they get older how much they'll change and turn into something incredibly beautiful? Great Haiku!

Timothy Hicks
Date: 6/12/2013 11:21:00 PM

I haven't thought of it in this way, actually. You bring new light to this haiku! :)

Timothy Hicks

Date: 6/5/2013 11:17:00 PM

Thanks for all the kind comments y'all! :)

Jack Jordan

Date: 6/5/2013 9:59:00 PM

Very nice... Haven't heard from you in a while. I hope all is well... Jack

Ilene Bauer

Date: 6/5/2013 4:39:00 PM

oh, you're so wise for someone so young! this is wonderful...

Susan Palli

Date: 6/5/2013 1:38:00 PM

Sweet!

Matthew Anish

Date: 6/5/2013 1:28:00 PM

Nice short poem here. I think somer women age like fine wine. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Poet Tacito

Date: 6/5/2013 8:28:00 AM

Oh yes. A woman should age like wine. Not just on the outside, but also within.

Russell Sivey

Date: 6/5/2013 5:54:00 AM

I give this Haiku high marks my friend! A very awesome poem here Timothy! I truly enjoyed reading this enlightening write this morning! What a tremendous piece, Great Work!!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 6/5/2013 4:21:00 AM

LOVED it, Timothy! Romantic...just my thing! :) Hugs!