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Haiku 33

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Haiku 33

art in poetry
ink runs as blood in veins
efflorescence words

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 1/18/2017 10:41:00 AM
I was going through my selected poems and poets when I saw this beautiful Haiku selected by me as my favorite one from you dear friend Carol. How are you dear friend and how is life away from poetry soup? ....Love and best wishes always...Ravindra K Kapoor
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Date: 5/12/2015 12:08:00 PM
wonderful haiku. Love SKAT
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Date: 10/5/2012 4:57:00 AM
What a haiku Carol! one can say you have poetry in your blood.. Well Done. Love and Regards, Nilofar
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Date: 6/7/2012 11:36:00 PM
gorgeous Carol...
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Date: 5/16/2012 5:28:00 PM
Beauty of ART
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Date: 5/16/2012 6:20:00 AM
Just stopping by to say hi! Have a blessed day!!! JP
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Date: 5/14/2012 10:02:00 AM
I love this, its beautiful and so true. Ink, Art, Beauty runs in an artists blood.
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Date: 5/13/2012 1:12:00 PM
Carol, this is a beauty! Happy Mother's Day to a gem! Love Wilma
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Date: 5/13/2012 5:55:00 AM
dear carol, u have written so wonderful haiku, and there is a pattern which when reverserd/mixed still preserve the essence u've written, corret me if wrong in the process.. Poetry in Art, Blood in veins as ink words efflorescence. i feel magical in reading .. truely inspirations haiku.. keep writing.. musafirs
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Date: 5/12/2012 8:14:00 AM
Just awesome. I want to commend you for supporting so many writers here. How you have time to write yourself my friend? THANK YOU, from my heart, I've been here over six years, in my anguish I delete, leave but I know where I belong, it won't be long... I'm back! hahahaLove ya Sister, Cindy Lu AKA Lucinda
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Date: 5/12/2012 7:13:00 AM
This is very lovely. I love your words and analogy! :)
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Date: 5/11/2012 3:10:00 PM
another lovely haiku, carol. thank you for all your sweet words x
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Date: 5/9/2012 8:18:00 PM
A very nice expressed Haiku., thanks for sharing it. God bless you. Hugs!Erich
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Date: 5/9/2012 3:57:00 PM
hello, CArol, just here to thank you for your recent comments. I really enjoy seeing this haiku of yours again too.
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Date: 5/9/2012 3:17:00 PM
I agree with everything Carolyn has written just below. Good work Carol
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Date: 5/9/2012 2:49:00 PM
What a beautiful haiku. For some of us, poetry IS in our blood. That's certainly true of you, Carol. Beautiful work! I'm glad you are better. I've been sick a few days. Hope it's not a flu. Love you, Carolyn
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Date: 5/9/2012 2:29:00 PM
Carol...sorry to hear you got that "crud" that was brewing in the Miami Valley...It seems that everyone has had some sort of a cold lately...folks calling off work left and right and even a few school districts have shut down with the flu...feel better soon, young lady! Get your rest! It took me 2 weeks to recover from mine. Love, Gwendolen
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Date: 5/9/2012 12:32:00 PM
carol dear, thanks for joy of being part of your contest... i had so much fun sharing our own festival here in the Philippines... my huggs to you! :)
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Date: 5/9/2012 11:35:00 AM
Carol, Greatness in your veins. Continue to have a great day. I hope your cold is better. Dr. "G"
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Date: 5/9/2012 8:51:00 AM
Carol great words..David
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Date: 5/8/2012 10:35:00 PM
Brilliant!It is a great honor to the art of poetry also!Thank you for all your support.With love,Fabiyas
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Date: 5/8/2012 2:27:00 PM
Great description - efflorescence. Love, daver
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Date: 5/8/2012 12:53:00 PM
Absolutely loved your Haiku, Carol... Thanks for your comments on my poems and "get well soon". love.
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Date: 5/8/2012 10:16:00 AM
I like that - "ink runs as blood" - so true for so many of us. a great description :)
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Date: 5/8/2012 7:14:00 AM
Mingled together They form a tapestry Like no other words. Loved your haiku Carol also nice to hear from you luv vie
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